Starshiness

@theshadow

oh really?

even my presumably clean but severely cringey romance writing lol

no seriously, I’m having second thoughts about this story now that I know someone’s reading it

I will update it for you as soon as I can eheheheheh

Typically I’m not emotional during movies, but when I watched If, it got me tearing up, especially the part where the girl (can’t remember her name, lol) is talking to her dad when he’s asleep in the hospital. I do remember thinking that it was a little dramatic, her being super worried about her dad as soon as things went downhill. (In fact, if…[Read more]

@anyone

(I’m posting this here cuz I don’t want to make a whole new topic 😛 )

I’ve heard mixed opinions on this, so I wanted to hear what y’all think. Do you find it annoying to read stuttering when it’s written into dialogue?

I ask that because some people suggest to indicate that the character was stuttering by the dialogue tag. The probl…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Yesss! For some reason I loved that movie too. (:

@koshka oh that’s hilarious

@theshadow also, if you happen to notice that Sniper’s and Engineer’s grammar when they talk is adjusted for their accents, but Medic’s and Spy’s isn’t, the only reason for that is I was tired of autocorrect freaking out on me every other time a character spoke, and decided to drop the written accent for the characters who talk less.

@ellette-giselle oooh I like this scene! And I can see where you incorporated our tips…..

@ellette-giselle haha that’s hilarious!!

@ellette-giselle well I enjoyed the boxcar series for a while when I was younger, I think the thing was that I never really took them as particularly realistic anyway lol

The original series was written at a time when the market wasn’t oversaturated with “kids always know better” content, so it wasn’t as bad then, but yeah I can see problems in…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint the chapter, what glitch?

@ellette-giselle yeah I get you on not liking the “Children disobey parents, keep secrets, do things the parents say no to, and in the end it all worked out because they were right and the parents were wrong, and there’s NO consequences for all of it” thing. Like, it’s not like parents aren’t wrong s…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle yeah it’s been a while since I watched the show, but I remember that scene/episode quite clearly. It was really well done.

@ellette-giselle @thearcaneaxiom ooh I remember that scene, that was a really good show.

also great moodboards!

And the “feeling like he’s a failure, stemming from pride” actually makes a weird amount of sense.

@ellette-giselle ooh wow! Super sad, but still a great job showing the harsh reality of death in war, especially on the losing side.

@freed_and_redeemed

YAY THAT’S AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@linus-smallprint wow! That was interesting!

@rae haha yep

looks like Sniper got back at Silvanis for calling him “weird hat guy” or whatever it was he called him.

@theshadow @theducktator @kyronthearcanin @princesachronicle22

Sniper

“…To get past my strong immunity, another thing from my father, it’d have to be some sleeping potion. Though, it could just be they used different m…[Read more]

@everybody

oooh I might go back to this forum sometimes!

Personally, I’m weird:

my best friends are my brother, my cousins, and a few fellow writers (at least one of which knows three ways to kill somebody with a fork), and the only male out of all those for the longest time was my bro before a guy joined my in-person teen writer group…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I’m obviously not a guy, but my advice would be to find a happy medium between those two extremes. (Unless he actually would be on one end of the spectrum). Try to think of him as simply a character. Keep in mind that he’s a guy, but don’t get so caught up in that that you give him a reaction that isn’t consistent with his per…[Read more]

@theshadow you’re good! I was just about to ask if we could get back to this lol

@kyronthearcanin @rae @theducktator @princesachronicle22

Sniper

“The only question is why, though, and how.” Trevor replied.

I thought back to my previous experience bein’ transported to a mysterious world, but I found I could remember nothin’ but huntin’ oth…[Read more]