Starshiness

Life upon the Darkness

Once again wrapped in cloth strips
And laid down on hewn out stone
But now soldiers guard the entrance
And Christ lay there all alone

A sword had pierced her own heart
Where Mary kept her treasury
She knew God’s Son had come to save us
Yet they’d killed the King of kings

A Great Light upon the darkness
Beaming tender…

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why did I say that in this forum and not the meme one oops

@linus-smallprint

Remember when you joked about Canada taking over the world?

I think Chile stole your country’s plans for world domination lol

@savannah_grace2009 Yeah, I know! It was crazy, I would only be able to do like four drafts before I’m like “Eh, let’s just publish this already” lol.

@theshadow thank you!

I’m working on it right now actually, heh.

@theshadow nah it’s fine! I can get these kinds of things done pretty fast anyway. It’s the initial draft that takes all the time, and I’m just about done with that.

@theshadow ok! lol

@theshadow I’d need to read through it again to pick up clues on who to kick out.

@theshadow you’re welcome!

I wanted it finished by Christmas, and it seems like the actual story itself will be, but I’ll only be able to type it up and get it to you afterward. Hopefully before the new year though!

@linus-smallprint Merry Christmas!

Do the races of Ehverwyld have a Christmas equivalent?

@savannah_grace2009 that’s cool!!

And hey, redrafting can be fun, reading through your story and thinking “oh, I gotta change that” or “what if I switch around these two scenes? It might flow better that way” or “let me change up this character’s role…..”

Except if you do too much. I read a comic recently that had 27 drafts before its final…[Read more]

@grcr you’re welcome!

@mineralizedwritings I exist to rant too lol

@theshadow Not me regretting I didn’t put a character in, cause this looks super fun lol

I vote Z, although X sounds fun too

@savannah_grace2009 I love this one too! I’m assuming the story, or at least the beginning, has changed a lot from previous drafts. It’s going in a good direction!

@theshadow It was honestly better than I expected, good enough to keep!

I would’ve only changed the ending if like a bunch of them died in the end or something, which didn’t happen.

haha you’re good, no reason to worry

@stephie you asked about my reasons for obsessing over the Australian continent and all it has to offer?

well, it all started when I was four. I had a Leapfrog video game console thingy and one of the games my parents bought me for it was a “world exploration” kinda game. You were supposed to be helping two pilots circumnavigate the globe, and…[Read more]

@theducktator haha!

yeah I love it.

@stephie yessss Italian food rules

I’m curious about the Australia story.

I’ll tell you all about that, but I’ll do it in the Chat Chat so we don’t take up Linus’s forum space lol

@grcr so Sverre is like my boy Crosshair in personality haha

he looks great!

@whalekeeper I have no idea who that is but she’s cool!

@liberty wowwww so pretty!!

I don’t think I read that story but now I’m sad that I didn’t. It looks amazing, and I love stories about wolf packs.

@liberty oooh I completely forgot about this forum. Maybe next time.