Erica

@freedomwriter76

Love it! It looks great XD

@lightoverdarkness6

both of you–

how’s you saterday?

I personally don’t have a preference! I think every story has a different vibe and needs different things, so idk! I think 3rd person can be just as personal as 1st person depending on how you show the charcaters thoughts and feelings.

@freedomwriter76

AWWW TONY!!!! 😭😭😭  AND STEVE!!!! 😭😭😭

That does make so much sense because it fits right in with his arc. Great job!!!

(And poor Bucky!! 😭😭😭)

@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings

Of course!! You’re so welcome!! <3<3 And yeah…XD

Matthew

The man turned to me, his eyes glittering briefly with irritation. But he merely smirked. “Now, now, no need to be rash…”

Tony interupted him,“Who are you, Crow?”

The man turned to Tony, eyes narrowed. “Crow?”

“Y’know…the black, obnoxious bi…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

So glad you like them! Thanks! And yeah.. things are escalating fast… XDXD

@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76

WHOOOO!!!!!! GO TONY!!! Aww, I love him!! Tony is going to have a very loyal boy following him around now ❤❤❤❤

ACHERON!!! *Death glare– or the Matthew glare XDXD* Wow, he wasn’t expecting that!!

And JARED!!! AHHH THE BABY!!!! 😭😭😭😭

And TAUREN AND LESLI AWWW I LOVE ALL OF Y’ALL’S CHARRIES SO MUCH!!!!!!…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 (A lot has happened.. XD)

WOOO YEAH GO TONY! THAT’S WHAT I’M TALKIN ABOUT!!XD

Tauren and Lesli

Tauren watches as the situation escalates. A blue glow appearing from Tony’s hand sends the man slamming against the wall.

“Don’t touch me again, Crow, or I’ll make sure you don’t come back from the next hit. Yo…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Jared blinked. “…Yes…but I-I really shouldn’t…”

Tauren gives a side eye to Lesli, who has been observing the conversation from a distance with a questioning gaze.

“You don’t seem… ok…”

“Hey kid what’s wrong here?” Lesli says, walking up next to Tauren. “You just really shy or…” She nods over at the man talking to…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6

“…Hello…” The boy shoots a nervous glance over at Tony and the other man.

Tauren shifts nervously.

Something is terribly wrong here.

“I know he said I’m hurricane hair.” Tauren keeps his voice low, noticing Jared’s nervousness. “My name’s actually Tauren.”

“And that’s Lesli over there. She’s a friend…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6

Tauren watches as Mathew spews angrily at the newcomers. He can’t blame him, they doesn’t look all that nice.

“Good going Mathew!” Lesli leans behind Tauren to give Mathew a hi-five. Her ecstatic smiles says how she feels about the situation.

“Tony Stark, and they are Matthew, Lesli, and Hurricane Hair. W…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76

WoW Matthew had enough!! And he barely got any yet! XD My baby is UPSET!!

@Freedomwriter76 @Mineralizedwritings

Tony will have a FANTABULOUS nickname for Acheron😂

Oh My Gosh CANNOT WAIT for that XDXDXD

And yes, your poor baby!!! 😭😭😭

Ugh yes 😡😡

And sure! 😊

Matthew

Tony stared, eyes wide, mouth slightly ajar for a long moment.

Then his eyes glanced over to Lesli, Hurricane Hair–I mean Tauren–and me. “…What jus…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

This is so good!

Aww thank you so much!! 🥰

Thanks for sharing, but how are they going to get out of there???? Is Dylan going to try coning Vance or something??? Don’t let them get hurt anymore!

Ahh I know!! I’ve got that partially figured out…heh 😅😏

And yes, I’ll make sure they’re not hurt anymore!!

(in this scene, anyway &…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

AHH I love it!!!! 💖💖😭😭

It’s a similair idea yeah, I changed it a little though. A lot of the book is them trying to complete his bucket list before he dies 😭 it’s going to be really sweet though 😭

😭😭😭😭

So sweet…but so sad!!

@freedomwriter76

So glad you like it! 💕💕

It’s a similair idea yeah, I changed it a little though. A lot of the book is them trying to complete his bucket list before he dies 😭 it’s going to be really sweet though 😭

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @anyoneelse

You guys… I’m starting a short story!!! EEEEEECK!!!

Im very excited, if you can”t tell. It’s first person pov, which isn’t my usuall, here’s a little snippet for you guys! It’s called “Bucket List”

I cross my arms as we walk, wincing as my twisted ankle comes in contact with the…[Read more]

@esther-c

Yes, Dylan!!!

Yes!!! Ah I love that part when he finally has had enough 😅😂🤭

He’s my fave of your charries!! 😁

Yeah, he’s one of my fav’s too!! Aww thank you sister!!! ❤️❤️❤️

Great scene!! 😄

Thank you!!! ❤️❤️😊

@freedomwriter76

AHH POOR JARED 😭😭😭

ACHERON!!! 😡😤😡😤

Ooh but this will be fun 😏.

And XD Poor Steve 😭😅😆

@freedomwriter76

Okay….

🤐🤐🤐

@mineralizedwritings

Hmm….

Oh yeah, you might…🤫🤔

@both-of-you-XD

So some of my books are going to be connected, kinda like yours, Freedom, just different time periods and my characters at different ages, because I just LOVE my charries, (shocker XD) and that style of writing, and it’s so much fun to…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 Oh wait… is this hisfic or like fantasy? I didn’t know you wrote anything else XD

Lesli and Tauren

Tauren looks up from the table chatter to the sound of the door opening. Two men appear in the doorway, one obviously acting like the superior. The other man wears a gold chain around his neck. Tauren furrows his eyebrows as…[Read more]