@spradlin
Active 8 years, 6 months ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
Gee guys, @kate-flournoy , @daeus , and @bluejay , I should have applied to you sooner! Thanks:) I can feel my creative juices being stimulated already.
I’m glad y’all like my poem. I liked it when I wrote it, but by the time I was done editing I wasn’t so sure anymore, you know?
Do y’all like the way it reads with the punctuation I chose?…[Read more]
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic KP Needs Your Questions on Time Management in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Thanks @Daeus 🙂 I’ll keep that in mind.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Question About Submissions and Sharing in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
:O Sarah!!! So this is the kind of friend that I’m emailing with?!? *Faints* 😛
@overcomer I do love the beach. You make me wish for summer all again. We are into our first month of autumn and heading for winter. 🙁 (And my birthday 🙂 )
@kate-flournoy A wise move. I shall endeavour to do the same. -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Question About Submissions and Sharing in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
I shall remain silent. *zips lips* 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Question About Submissions and Sharing in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Gosh, @spradlin, how devious!!! 😛 😉
I would love it if you’d post it here, @overcomer. 😀 Seriously.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Question About Submissions and Sharing in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Gosh, @spradlin, how devious!!! 😛 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
Hm… ‘Dust and Ink’? ‘Endurance’? ‘An Inky Legacy’? ‘Forever’?
Love the quick, tight rhythm, by the way! I honestly can’t find anything I would change. Nice and simple, but pithy at the same time. Love it. 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
Written Words.
Ha, I thought of another one. Yay! (Don’t know if it’s any good though.) -
BlueJay replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
@overcomer Ooooo….great poem. I really loved it.
Hmm…titles. Not my strong point.
The typewriter.
Words.
“Come on Tess. Think, think.” *scrunches up eyes and holds breath* Gasp, gasp, gasp. “Nope, that’s all I can think of for now.” 🙁 Sorry -
Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Question About Submissions and Sharing in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Thanks, @spradlin , (excuse me while I get some sand out of my ear. I just spent the afternoon at the beach. Isn’t Spring great?) and @kate-flournoy ! That is reassuring.
Now I’m also wondering if posting our content here to share with each other could be considered a prior publication (disqualifier) for other sites’ contests etc. I…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
You see, @daeus , if I name it after the first line it sounds like it’s a poem about a train, and if I name it after the second, it’s a bit vague . . . it could be about a sports car, or a new pair of shoes.
As for naming it after what it’s about, @writefury , that’s kinda difficult. . .
It’s about typewritten words outlasting the machines used…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
Here, you can read it for yourselves. @writefury , @daeus , @kate-flournoy
Any name ideas or editing ideas are welcome!
Clickety-clack,
New and black;
Click-clack-ding!
And the paper rolls back.Letter then letter
Line by line,
White paper is marred
By a black ink design.Clickety-clack,
Old and rusted;
Years have passed
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
Here, you can read it for yourselves. @writefury , @daeus , @kate-flournoy
Any name ideas or editing ideas are welcome!
Clickety-clack,
New and black;
Click-clack-ding!
And the paper rolls back.Letter then letter
Line by line,
White paper is marred
By a black ink design.Clickety-clack,
Old and rusted;
Years have passed
Since last it was…[Read more] -
Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
Here, you can read it for yourselves. @writefury , @daeus , @kate-flournoy
Any name ideas or editing ideas are welcome!
Clickety-clack,
New and black;
Click-clack-ding!
And the paper rolls back.Letter then letter
Line by line,
White paper is marred
By a black ink design.Clickety-clack,
Old and rusted;
Years have passed
Since last it was…[Read more] -
Faith Kindred replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
He shrugs and answers, “The dragon from the north, yes.”
Seeing the look of shock on my face, he crosses his arms.
“Must have lost more of your memories than I thought,” he mutters.
“D-dragons don’t…exist!” I manage to exclaim.
“No, not in present times. But, uh… we’re not really in present times, now, are we?”
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic KP Needs Your Questions on Time Management in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Thanks for your help, everyone! Your thoughts are helpful for us as we figure out what we’re doing with our to-be-revealed special project! 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
He smiles crookedly and comes to stand just below me. “You don’t do this whole ‘Old English’ thing much, do you? That’s okay. I don’t do it too well either, and I’ve been here for… oh, about a year already.’ He pauses, and a tiny furrow creases his forehead. “Actually… I’ve been waiting for you. You did bring the box, didn’t you?”
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Greta replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
Let me try that again… for some reason I switched to past tense.
“Who are you?” I manage to ask him.
“Someone who knows why you’re here,” the man answers.
I can’t stop staring at the man. There’s something unusual about him that I can’t put my finger on… -
Faith Kindred replied to the topic Why do you write? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Because writing is a way I can pour out my ideas (and dreams, feelings, expectations…) and turn them into something that others would want to hear.
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic Why do you write? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Because writing is the only way I can pour out my ideas (and dreams, feelings, expectations…) and turn them into something that others would want to hear.
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