Sarah Spradlin

@daughteroftheking Then my reputation proceeds me. Fear me, all ye KaPeefer chairs!

@catwing @that_writer_Girl_99 @daughteroftheking @winter-rose Let’s see if I can do this without melting any chairs. I’m on.

@aislinn-mollisong I only had time to look through the prologue and chapter one, but here’s a couple things I noted:

The prose feels very choppy and is very bare-bones. Try fleshing out your descriptions more and varying the sentence structure for the writing to feel more smooth.

You do a lot of telling as opposed to showing, which is probably…[Read more]

Praying, everybody.

@perfectfifths Good to know! My to-read list is ridiculously long, but I’ll see if I can fit that somewhere on it. xD

@daeus I’m a fan. YES.

@catwing *grins and tries to catch a few feathers*

[Yeah, I did make a LotR pun. XD But unfortunately he doesn’t turn me invisible. Though, come to think of it, he might turn himself invisible… There have been times he’s been so still I somehow forgot he was there, and then flinched because he suddenly moved and became visible again. So weird.…[Read more]

@Anne-of-Lothlorien I’ll be praying.

@Salome01W4G @EpicAddie2 Yow, I’ll be praying. I haven’t had to move for at least 11 years, but I can imagine how hard it’d be. I don’t really want to experience it any time soon. 😛

Btw @That_Writer_Girl_99, how’d your dad do with his exam?

@Anne-of-Lothorien I’ll be praying.

@Salome01W4G @EpicAddie2 Yow, I’ll be praying. I haven’t had to move for at least 11 years, but I can imagine how hard it’d be. I don’t really want to experience it any time soon. 😛

Btw @That_Writer_Girl_99, how’d your dad do with his exam?

*frowns* Yes, I see… *glares at golden-armored Catwing* Technically, I never started trying to conquer this land yet. Wait, did I say ‘yet’? Ah, you can completely forget that. *turns back to you* *grins brightly* Yes, you keep an eye on me. XD

[That’s adorable, about your cat following you like a little shadow. 🙂 I used to have a dog like…[Read more]

@catwing @anyone else I’m signing out now. I wrote about 500 and beta-read a bit.

@catwing *pops in* What? Where? I don’t see her! Aha!
*pulls Dragon Snapper out of the internets*
Stop melting chairs!

@catwing *wobbles and steadies self on imaginary wall* You know. The sequel on page 31 of this topic.

@emily Greetings!

@shannon I do eat food like that from time to time–but I still don’t like onion rings or popcorn shrimp. 😛
Dragon Snappers like to eat lots of italian food and anything with noodles. They also eat chicken, and noodles. Lots of noodles. 😛

@shannon Well…I don’t really eat anything deep fried, so if you say so. 😛
Welcome!

@kate-flournoy Sometimes, I can be smart. 😛

@Dragon-Snapper I commend thy wisdom.

@kate-flournoy Oh dear. Yep. I don’t have any of those on stock.
*shudder* Not those.