Brianne

@hybridlore

I’m in Sunrise Peak as well!

Yeah, i guess so 🤷🏻‍♀️

@keilah-h @hybridlore

Thanks ladies!!

I’m kinda nervous to submit it, but idk why 🫣😂

@mineralizedwritings

Aw, I’m sorry!! I’ve been praying for you. Is it the health stuff, or just everything?

I’m doing pretty good. I still struggle with my OCD a bit, but for the most part it’s better. I do still have bad days though.

Okay. What time zone are you in? I believe the next one will be at 11 EST, but I guess that still counts…[Read more]

@theducktator

Yeah! It’s not too late, if you’re not too busy for March!

@ellette-giselle

Ahh, yeah. That would explain it

@liberty Ellette is in Brookside Stories, I believe.

@liberty

XD Yeah, poor Dale. That was a lot of snow in his mouth at the end.

@ellette-giselle

He already is. 😉

Oh boy . . . XD *whispers* What did I just get myself into…

Soo… is it pronounced to rhyme with bay-lick?

@linus-smallprint

Pronounced the same as Alec?

I was saying it “ay-lec” in my head, but I don’t know if that’s accurate.

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, it gave me very . . . Socratic-discussion vibes. But it was great. That’s funny, I also like to debate… slightly lol. It’s a little stressful.

I don’t know, I just like him. He’s funny and impulsive (li…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I love it!!! Julian is amazing. The debating scene was a nice change from how they’ve had to speak to others in the past.

@ellette-giselle

Weird. Are you on the home page where it shows you all the topics?

@ellette-giselle

So, the website isn’t loading for me. But I know they send out a video with help to figure out how to navigate stuff. I know it’s super overwhelming the first day, but you’ll figure it out in no time.

@esther-c

Love it! The ending is intriguing. 😉

@ellette-giselle @esther-c @liberty

I guess the Chickadee tent was filled all the way, or they’re not doing it this year? I’m in Sunrise Peak

@liberty @ellette-giselle

Yay!! I’ll see you guys there!! 😁

Liberty, great section! 😂

@ellette-giselle

Lol.

@esther-c

Sorry I’m just now getting to this!!!!

My main critique would be that you spend a lot of time on dialogue. I kind of feel like we just got thrown into the story and all we know about the characters is because of what they say. Maybe breaking up some dialogue and really showing us who they characters are would help…it kind of feels l…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Poor Highscribe. What did you do to her?

@ellette-giselle

Leon is definitely more confident and the leader. It feels like Julian looks to him and gets more concerned about things. And Julian likes to make quips. That was just what I think I noticed from this chapter.

@liberty @keilah-h @theducktator @hybridlore

Ok! So I’m not posting this as soon as I wanted, lol, but this is the almost final draft and I’d like your thoughts again if y’all are willing.

I didn’t change any of the tenses or add words because I wanted it to sound very “in the moment” if that makes sense. I did add a couple of things that hopefu…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

He’s my favorite so I want him to die.

No wonder you kill off so many characters. 😅

🖋️Official KP Psychopath✒️

Lolol