Brianne

@savannah_grace2009

Alpha killed one of @ellette-giselle ‘s Agents.

@ellette-giselle

I knoww. It does seem to work with his backstory, though. Poor guy. Ten years in slavery…

@ellette-giselle

I like him! He has a funny personality. I think he might become a Christian eventually.

@ellette-giselle

Great section!! It seemed pretty realistic. Oof, Ian’s going to be trouble 😬

I can’t wait for the next one!

@theshadow

I’ve written a handful of contemporary (not finished them though lol), and I’m by no means an expert in this field, but I’d say it really comes down to adding conflict, even if it’s as simple as a strained relationship with a family member. I don’t know your characters, and I’ve also never read The Penderwicks so it’s hard to know h…[Read more]

@rae

Did you hear that one of my characters actually did kill someone in the School RP?

WHATTTT
RUTH NOOOOOOOOOO WHYYY

@jonas

I think that Character Party was ONE OF A KIND

And that’s why we can’t ever replicate it

Sadly

But like I think I’m gonna remember it for the rest of my life…

@trailblazer @beth-torres

ahh…memories

*sniff*

@theducktator

Thank you! 🥰

@esther-c

Thanks!! 🤗

@hybridlore

Praying for you!! 🙏🏻 💕

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, that would be a cool scene! I’ll have to try to see if I can fit something like that into the story.

@theshadow

Okay, great! 😊

@godlyfantasy12

Ohhh, I’m kind of in a similar position as I’m writing the second draft of a WIP. I’m keeping some scenes, shuffling some around, and adding new ones. It’s been a fun juggling act 🥴😂

I don’t know how much of a plotter you are, but having a big picture idea of your plot is going to be super helpful. You don’t necessarily…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Sorry, didn’t get tagged yesterday. I think Linus has a valid concern about the scene with Julian and Dian, but moving the scene where Julian shares the Gospel with him to a day or so later would fix it, in my opinion.

I think it was nice to see Julian argue with God a little bit. It’s slightly a different reaction than you…[Read more]

@theshadow
Thank you! 🥰

I would appreciate it if you guys could pray for me! My OCD’s been worse lately, and I’ve been feeling depressed some days. Just pray for healing for my OCD and that God would help me lean on Him and grow closer to Him.

@theshadow

Yay! It looks good! 😊 Looking forward to the next one!

@ellette-giselle

That’s insane, but yeah, at least the class all knew it was wrong. Thanks for the inspiration!

@mineralizedwritings

Yeah, it’s rough, I feel you. Exactly, it’s just that sometimes the things that feel so big to us don’t matter so much to other people, or they’re too hard to explain.

Okay, sounds good! Hopefully someday we can plan one you’ll be able to make. 😊

@esther-c

I’m loving this story! It has a warm and cozy feel but also real challenges high schoolers face.

Easton brought his sand bike to a halt a few feet from the campfire the rest were beginning to set up. He removed his helmet, shaking out his hair.

OK I was majorly confused here at first- I didn’t know who “the rest” was referring to until…[Read more]