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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I’m shaking my head at you right now.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yeah, sometimes it looks different and the entire website doesn’t load, but it still works usually.
You 100% are!!
Nice. 😎
I feel like I’ve had a tone of those scenes though.
Yeah, good point. Maybe add something in their journal entries about how it went well, and how Leon is proud of Julian? Something like that.
You have no ide…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I got tagged for both of these, so I’m assuming it’s working again for the most part.
since no one has been replying to this except for Hybridlore,
I’m just your #1 fan 😉 Well, online fan anyway.
Good section. I was right about them meeting the boy again, but wrong about him coming with them. Oh well.
When did Leon start calli…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
30k words in The Baron Chronicles!!!!!!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Probably not, I guess I just missed that.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
ack, yes, I missed a word there. When I read it over my brain said it was there. XD
XD Yep, happens to me too.
Okay, so Julian was about 17-19 in Joseph’s book (I never specified) which makes him in his late twenties now. Leon is a few years older so late twenties to very early thirties.
Rolf and Roland are around 19-25
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Sorry, for some reason I didn’t get an email for this. 🙁
Good section! I like Julian’s reaction to Leon being the White Knight, and how they resolve their argument.
Julian raised an eyebrow. “I think that’s about the first time you have ever admitted I was better at you than something.”
Lol.
He knew this room very well. Leon…
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hybridlore replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I read through it and loved it! I think it will really touch the heart of whoever is going to read it. Don’t let the enemy convince you otherwise. If the Holy Spirit is calling you to do this, you can do it. He’ll give you the strength.
My favorites were Story #2, #3, #5, and #6. For order, I would suggest maybe putting the…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Thank you soooo much girl…
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hybridlore replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009
Sara, that sounds like a great idea!! I’ll try to read through it and give some feedback if I have any. You’ve got this!! -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Really?? tysmmm that means a lot <3
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yeah…I think mostly I need to write like two more pieces, and then it’s just editing the rest. So hopefully this is doable XDXD *hopefully**
I think I just need enthusiastic pep talking right now, but emailing would help a lot too!!!
That’s totally fine!!! Just don’t let me give up lollll
That’s the main thing I’m…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Also, this isn’t going to be a novel. More like a collection of works that intertwine somehow.
I mainly just need accountability, but I would love your guys’ thoughts because I want this to be GOOD!!! It is going to a silent auction after all hahahaha
SO please tear it apart as well XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ started the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@esther-c @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @loopylin @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @raxforge @rae @freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @theducktator @theshadow @the_lost-journal @trailblazer @keilah-h @anyone-else-i’m-blanking
I’m doing something drastic.
Something crazy.
I suppose I shall start at the beginning…
Our youth…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
@stephie
Oh yes, I’ll be praying! <3@theducktator
Yay!! Praise the Lord!!! -
hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
@theducktator
Praying!! -
hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
Yayy!!!! Praise God!!
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Rainbows, unicorns, and random questions in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
Way to go for standing up for what you believe even if it has put you in a pickle! I was homeschooled up until my senior year, so the only religion teacher I had was my mom lol. But in the one year that I was in public school I had some disagreements with one teacher- fortunately he was very open-minded and we were able to have healthy…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yeah, that sounds about right. (It’s one of my favorite words 🤪). I’ll try to be mindful of it.
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Okay, yay! Does Ellette have your email?
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