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Allison replied to the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 1 month ago
I think the second one,
“But I am neither bird nor wife and my dreams
Are shining, a full moon tonight:”
Has a better flow to it 🙂
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
No worries about the quotes, it’s legible!
Oh wow I never thought about it like that! I was just thinking that the prologue would be how the world of Andromeda took a turn and how evil was let into the world. No, Earth and Andromeda don’t represent Adam and Eve, they’re just two different worlds. I’m not sure if that answe…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
@thearcaneaxiom : I’m sorry I made that look so confusing!
thanks @jonas for helping me!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
@cloakedmystery
really???? i’m gonna try it…
‘The process I described would also give you green lines.’
i hope it works lol
*me casually making a fool out of myself on KP but oh well its ok 😂*
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
I should have done that but I saw other KP users quoting people with “green lines”, I know I sound like a little kid, haha but idk how else to explain it! So I clicked ‘quote’ and you can see what happened 🤦♀️
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Trailblazer replied to the topic God in Our Stories in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings
I feel like this also depends on the genre you’re writing in. Fantasy/sci-fi is a hard one because it deals with more abstract constructs and is more focused on theme, while something like modern fiction is more black and white- either you have God in the picture or you don’t. I don’t really write fantasy since I…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Howdy! New here in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
Welcome! I’m Janessa, and I’m still pretty new here myself! I mainly write contemporary fiction or historical fiction, but I also do journalism. I enjoy photography and hiking as well (hence the name Trailblazer lol).
It looks like you’ve been asked a lot of questions already, but I have one for you, too:
What’s your favorite time…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Howdy! New here in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
@s.tastet
Hi!! Welcome to Kingdom Pen!
I’m hybridlore, or Hybrid, an (also!) homeschooled, teenage girl and Christian! Nice to meet you!
I play the violin, love to read, and mostly write in science fiction or fantasy worlds, though my current WIP leans more toward the dystopian side.What are your favorite books/series besides Harry…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
um apparently i did something wrong, hope this still makes sense? sorry, this was my first time quoting someone…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
okay i’m gonna attempt to quote, something I’ve never done before so bear with me if this doesn’t make sense at all:
Oh wow I never thought about it like that! I was just thinking that the prologue would be how the world of Andromeda took a turn and how evil was let into the world. No, Earth and Andromeda don’t represent Adam…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Howdy! New here in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
Those are good, I cant choose either. Probably 2 and 4 and 7. But then I also like 1, 3, 5 , 6 also 🙂
Wait you like to work out???🤯 I looove working out🤣 My brother thinks I’m crazy, but I think its fun, 😀
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Allison replied to the topic Howdy! New here in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
Oooh! I loooove Harry Potter! Which book is your favorite? I absolutely can not skateboard at all but can roller skate.🤣 I’m not a big fan of fishing, my brother loves it so he makes me do it with him, but I also love to go shooting with my dad, we have a big property and a shooting range in the woods! 😀 Nice to meet you!
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Smiley started the topic Project Elites in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Hey Y’all
It’s time to rant about one of my projects (I have many but this one has taken a special place in my heart)
And some of Y’all know it… If you remember Tomorrow’s War… well it’s changed a lot. AKA completely, to the point where only the characters’ names remain, (Actually I changed one of the names…)But I still love this story, and t…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Howdy! New here in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
Welcome! I’m Acancello, also known as Allison! I’m also homeschooled and I’m in 10th grade. I love guinea pigs, dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food, writing, reading, talking and a lot more 😁! I write Dystopian and post-apocalyptic books. I’m so glad you could come to Kingdom Pen! OK, now I’ll ask you some hopefully not already…[Read more]
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Smiley replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
I know how hard it is to focus on one thing at a time, heh 😅 I just had to fully commit to finishing my novel, and it helped with all the support I had 💗 anytime you wanna share anything from your novel(s), I’d 100% love to hear…even if it’s just some random brainstorming or something else, doesn’t have to be actual writing…
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
I have just read the prologue, and yes, it is very much just the events of the fall, but still intriguing. I’m curious, since this is referred to as Earth and Andromeda, are these not just allegorically, but literally the events of Adam and Eve, just called by different names, then upon being written, oral tradition shifted it…[Read more]
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Smiley replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
What if Bucky was… yeah I got nothing, I’m not very clever XD
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Smiley replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
I know right?! it’s like insane and my mind is running wild with ideas and scenes XD
but like Wanda and Pietro would be like so protective of their little brother and yesss Pietro and Peter would be the best!!!!
now my head is trying to explode with ideas and things I wanna see, and I’m just over here like: “I have a book to edi…
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Smiley replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @euodia-vision @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings
So I was googling some Marvel things, gotta put some research in XD
when I stumbled across some forums talking about a Marvel announcement
next year they will be releasing a line of what if? comice books, set in the comic universe (which I don’t read or keep up…[Read more]
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