Brianne

@theducktator

Excuse me while I go DIE OF CUTENESS. I was literally hopping around squealing, and then ranted about it for five minutes to one of my sisters. Your couples are ADORABLE. I LOVE THEM.

Ahhhh, I’m so glad you love themmm!!! 🥰🥰

(it’s actually kinda funny, my Mom and I recently had a conversation about why me and my siblings are…[Read more]

@loopylin

I don’t think they have.

Chase

“Woah. Look out, everybody. Rain storm incoming.”

Chase heard the comment, but ignored it, thinking the girl was talking to someone else.

“You okay, kid?”

Chase paused. At first, he didn’t reckonize the voice, but now he almost thought he knew this person. He turned and looked at her. To him, she s…[Read more]

@theshadow

*bursts in through the door and tumbles onto the ground* *hops up and dusts self off* Did I hear someone mention ConTEmPoRarY fiCtIOn??? 👀 I’m here for it 😎

First of all, make sure you’re reading contemporary!!! Especially within the little genres that you want to focus on. I can’t stress how helpful this is. I know some authors are l…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Alpha killed one of @ellette-giselle ‘s Agents.

@ellette-giselle

I knoww. It does seem to work with his backstory, though. Poor guy. Ten years in slavery…

@ellette-giselle

I like him! He has a funny personality. I think he might become a Christian eventually.

@ellette-giselle

Great section!! It seemed pretty realistic. Oof, Ian’s going to be trouble 😬

I can’t wait for the next one!

@theshadow

I’ve written a handful of contemporary (not finished them though lol), and I’m by no means an expert in this field, but I’d say it really comes down to adding conflict, even if it’s as simple as a strained relationship with a family member. I don’t know your characters, and I’ve also never read The Penderwicks so it’s hard to know h…[Read more]

@rae

Did you hear that one of my characters actually did kill someone in the School RP?

WHATTTT
RUTH NOOOOOOOOOO WHYYY

@jonas

I think that Character Party was ONE OF A KIND

And that’s why we can’t ever replicate it

Sadly

But like I think I’m gonna remember it for the rest of my life…

@trailblazer @beth-torres

ahh…memories

*sniff*

@theducktator

Thank you! 🥰

@esther-c

Thanks!! 🤗

@hybridlore

Praying for you!! 🙏🏻 💕

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, that would be a cool scene! I’ll have to try to see if I can fit something like that into the story.

@theshadow

Okay, great! 😊

@godlyfantasy12

Ohhh, I’m kind of in a similar position as I’m writing the second draft of a WIP. I’m keeping some scenes, shuffling some around, and adding new ones. It’s been a fun juggling act 🥴😂

I don’t know how much of a plotter you are, but having a big picture idea of your plot is going to be super helpful. You don’t necessarily…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Sorry, didn’t get tagged yesterday. I think Linus has a valid concern about the scene with Julian and Dian, but moving the scene where Julian shares the Gospel with him to a day or so later would fix it, in my opinion.

I think it was nice to see Julian argue with God a little bit. It’s slightly a different reaction than you…[Read more]

@theshadow
Thank you! 🥰

I would appreciate it if you guys could pray for me! My OCD’s been worse lately, and I’ve been feeling depressed some days. Just pray for healing for my OCD and that God would help me lean on Him and grow closer to Him.

@theshadow

Yay! It looks good! 😊 Looking forward to the next one!