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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
@rae @mineralizedwritings @esther-c
Here’s a new scene I’m working on. Thoughts? Concerns?
She ran across the prairie. She didn’t know where she was going, and she didn’t care. Running helped her to forget…to forget last night, and all the other nights like it.
“Scream all you want…ain’t nobody gonna here you…” she could still feel the welts…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Yep!
Heyyy!
Hi!! I’m so sorry I haven’t been on in forever (Maybe its only been like 3 days, but still a long time 🙂 ) So… I have been crazy, crazy busy. Like, I even went to my first barn dance in my new town and there were almost 100 high schoolers🤯 Personally I love to hang out with people so I went without knowing anyon…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 12 months ago
all this is hurting my brain!!! 😂 🤣 It’s been a long day…
So why did the Pythonos name it the UNIT? (In this case you might want to make it ‘Unit’ in lowercase, because capitalization usually denotes an acronym.)
Otherwise, you could make it an acronym. I could help brainstorm ideas for that if you like.
Any help would be great. I’m a h…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
So we’re going with second idea, just the Queen uses the magical house all our characters are locked inside to get to Lillen?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 12 months ago
Sorry😅 I know how frustrating it can be when you see your brain child measured and prodded as if it were in the UNIT🤣 Your taking it really well though, and even with excitement, so that’s a really good mentality. Your showing wonderful meekness in that way, being open to learning and changing for the better. I would say that y…
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Ruth replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 12 months ago
Now the question is, at what point do like Nahim that if he died, would you feel any emotion for him?
And I hope you don’t mind this question, but do have a hard time separating the words Alin and Akin? Do they look exactly the same to you?
Thanks for suggestions! I love suggestions, they always teach me something. 😃.
Do you think…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @rae @acancello @mineralizedwritings @esther-c
I’m fine with it, but I haven’t dabbled in fantasy/medieval writing very much so I might not be as active in the RP. Howeverrrr I’ve read some, so hopefully I won’t get stuck too much lol. Kari’s a big reader/writer, so she’s already kinda wondering if she stepped through a…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 12 months ago
Believe it or not, every one of your posts make me laugh. It would be interesting to meet you in person one day, that conversation could go really good or really bad fast.
I apprieciate your comment very much. I shall be changing that. In fact, I’ve been doing a re-work of chapter one and shall post it here when I’m done.
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 12 months ago
Well, the Traitor normally specializes in the UNIT and has virtually nothing to do with the prison block, so he’s like the lead scientist. Good idea about the scars, I might use that, because since he doesn’t go to the prison block, like you said, how would she know? And yeah, I was kind of going for that he goes around to mak…
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Smiley replied to the topic writing historical fictions in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Also I was just reminded of this book that was a historical non fiction, about these teen boys who actually formed a resistance in denmark
they took weapons and sabotaged the forces
and they were disappointed in their country for surrendering so quickly
I think it’s called “the boys who challenged Hitler” totally recommend
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Smiley replied to the topic writing historical fictions in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Okay, good to know…she could escape most detection that way for sure.
Yeah, and honestly the story is in very early development, meaning that there could always be a spy or something
Okay…alright…
with how the Nazis saw Poles & just from what you’ve told me so far, it would possibly be more fitting (and always keep in m…
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Smiley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Okay wait…
I’ve been reading some texts about Bucky dreams and it reminds me of this annoying thing that happened
Me and my friend were talking about fictional crushes, and I said mine is definitely Pietro XD and then she texted me the next morning that she had a dream about me and…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Hi!! I’m so sorry I haven’t been on in forever (Maybe its only been like 3 days, but still a long time 🙂 ) So… I have been crazy, crazy busy. Like, I even went to my first barn dance in my new town and there were almost 100 high schoolers🤯 Personally I love to hang out with people so I went without knowing anyone :D…[Read more]
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Smiley replied to the topic writing historical fictions in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
(also, did u know that there were real life stories from ww2 of people not Jewish falling in love with Jews?? An SS officer even did it…)
No, I didn’t but that’s like really sweet because it’s like Romeo and Juliet (meaning it’s also really sad…)
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Smiley replied to the topic writing historical fictions in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
For one, don’t worry about rambling, I rather enjoy a good rant (sine I’ve been known to give them, just ask my cabin mates at camp XD)
I can only guess that Lena is hiding somewhere?? Because the Nazis would take her in a heartbeat, even if her father was collaborating with them. (her being a “drain on society” according to the…
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Smiley replied to the topic writing historical fictions in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
So… here’s the general idea… and it would probably be just a short story or something
and I’m very new to the Historical fiction world, so I’m not sure how creative this is or if it’s already been done a million times
so please give your honest thoughts (I can take criticism)
Filip was a good man, but the loss of his…[Read more]
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Smiley replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
*Looks at my watch* I think this is a new record of how long you went without coming up with a new fanfic
JKJKJKJKJKJK (I totally don’t do the same thing)
But this one!!! this one is like so terribly sad yet happy… (because like she has her son, but she doesn’t, and…)
But now I can see her just be such a mother to all the…[Read more]
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Smiley replied to the topic writing historical fictions in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Okay so I just put in a lot of research about WWII
mostly about Poland and other countries invaded by Germany, and that has to be the most overwhelming and saddest research I’ve ever done
I’ve obviously heard about the holocaust and stuff, but it’s just so hard to grasp that people had to live through that
But now I have ideas for some…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Yeah…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
But…we kind of need everyone’s approval, like Min and Trailblazer and Acancello…speaking of Acancello, she hasn’t been on in a while. Should we wait?? or should we just go for it, lol
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