Brianne

@freedomwriter76

How could I ever forget???😭😭😭😭

I love and miss Fin. 💔

I feel for you, I get way too emotionally invested in characters

(speaking of all of this research, I’m listening to a WW2 podcast and they’re talking about Erwin Rommel, lol! he was one of the ones that led the Blitzkrieg on both Poland and France and is the most famous Germa…

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@aranel

I pronouce genre as GEN-ear and puree as PUR-ee. I do pronounce caramel correctly though! Which is odd considering me. I also have some kind of accent that my best friend notified me of this week. She has no idea what it is though.

Have you read C. S. Lewis’s Space Trilogy?

Yes, though not the last one all the way through…he lost me o…[Read more]

@savannah_grace200

*Gasps* I love the blue theme, and oh my word she has blue hair!!!!

I’ve always wanted to write a character with colorful hair XD

@freedomwriter76

*Cries*

That quote “You can’t break what’s already broken”

I love Hans and I’m kind of mad that he’s a villain!!! I mean it makes sense but still, why??!!!!

@acancello

Lol, the “Cotton-eye Joe” is one I can do, but I’ve discovered that there are new dances that are sort of taking over. Have you heard of the Church Clap? All the youth at my church like doing that one but I haven’t figured out how to do it yet. I tried once and my legs got all twisted up. I guess I just need more practice,…[Read more]

Also, I need to come up with a name for my short story/novelists thing XD

@freedomwriter76

Ohhh, ok! (well, there were different established Police forces in different Nazi-Occupied countries. ALSO, half of Poland was Nazi-Occupied and the other half was Soviet-Occupied, so that could also make a difference XD)

Aww yes, the one thing that never ends in historical fiction… research XD

*CRIES*

YOU’RE GONNA MAKE ME L…

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@freedomwriter76

*sobs* Riker!!!

And Leon… him bringing the knife honestly tells so much about his personality, how his trust in the world has basically been demolished

The poor boy…

@freedomwriter76 @smiley @mineralizedwritings @grcr

Here’s my newest board!

@acancello

Lol! Maybe you should try going to events in your town with your family? Or like I said above, events with friends? Oh! Having a party for no reason at all is also fun!

I’m not trying to push you to do anything you dont want though😊 I just hope you get to meet some real good friends💗 💕 🤗

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@rae

This is okay a little bit and in some places (for instance I think it was well-used in the scene where Lilitu was telling Sef his dream) but eventually, and in some places, it just gets annoying and interrupts a read.

Okay, got it! I agree I definitely overused those in this segment.

@whalekeeper

Also about the critique on…

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@freedomwriter76

(and girl…I was just reading it yesterday…you NEED to read “Resistance” by Jennifer A. Nielson. It’s about a teen Jewish girl that’s in an anti-Nazi resistance group in Poland during ww2…it is AMAZING so far, and it would be a great historical fiction to read, especially for you)

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@freedomwriter76

👍.

@trailblazer

Yep! It was really fun, I have never been to one either and decided to give it a shot and was so glad I did! We learned about 6 different, simple dances and I tried to do the “Cotton-eye Joe” But couldn’t, 😀

@savannah_grace2009

Hi!

And don’t worry about not being on, you’re good! It’s good to see that you have a life outside of KP…(unlike me…)

I totally understand, when we first moved I was on KP a ton more than I am now 🙂 Sometimes it helps just to put yourself out there, go to an event with other teens (bring a friend or two if your nervous)…[Read more]

@fernweh_grace

Oh my goodness XD

@freedomwriter76

Yes, it would help to have the reference pics… I’ve never actually drawn this type of person before. Thanks!

Oh and it could be a week before I have the drawing cuz I’m not the type to sit down and start and finish a drawing all in one day, I take my time and frequently like to return with new eyes to look at it.

@savannah_garce2009

All I have to say is it’s good and I want you to read the article below, especially number 2.

https://storyembers.org/5-stylistic-choices-you-need-to-stop-making/

This is okay a little bit and in some places (for instance I think it was well-used in the scene where Lilitu was telling Sef his dream) but eventually, and in…[Read more]