Brianne

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, I gotcha. But it did catch me off guard.

I feel like he won’t … but I could be wrong. And if he betrayed them, he probably wouldn’t come back.

@freed_and_redeemed

Ohhh, they look so good!!!

@ellette-giselle

The new section looks good too! It did confuse me when, in the letter, they mentioned that Jews were not better than Greeks. This seems kind of out of place in your fantasy world. Maybe cut that sentence, or you could put, Ardentans are not greater than those of the Empire? Or something like  that.

Anyway, good job! I’m ro…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

The new section looks good. Sorry, I was at co-op and then had a lot of notifs when I got back so it was a little overwhelming.

Whatever happened to the prince. . . *shudders* Creepy. Hopefully Leon and Julian will get to talk to him soon.

@ellette-giselle @hybirdlore @theducktator @keilah-h

The Final Story.

Please note that I might drastically change this one later since I’m not 100% happy with it, but I’ve been changing and playing with this story for so long now that I feel like I need to post it, gather your thoughts (tips for how to make the story better and criticism very…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

That’s terrible. Praying!! 🙏

@ellette-giselle

Also, I am dying for a protective older brother moment somewhere. 😂

I’ll see if I can put that in there somewhere… I’m sure there’ll be an opportunity. 😉😊

Liam totally counts, I just forgot him. 😢

@theshadow

Great!

Also… don’t hurt Everett please!!

Lol. Three of them want me to make him suffer 🤨 My plan hasn’t changed, though. There are challenges ahead, but more for Sara and Cole. And Alec.

@ellette-giselle

*smiles and nods* yes, put those characters through the fire, and we’ll see on the other side who were the true ones, and who wer…

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@ellette-giselle @keilah-h

I count six that Ellette has killed… but pretty much everyone in her books has almost died at least once. 

I want to see him put to the test, and I want to see him face consequences for that choice, even though he chose the right thing, and I want to watch him struggle through and stand firm in that!

 

I just want yo…

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@godlyfantasy12

I don’t think so… Like I said, I’d have to look at it.

@whalekeeper

Yeah, maybe try.

@ellette-giselle

Yay, the bonus section!! XD

The part where Julian says he has to stay in his room and then two sentences later says he might go downstairs was a little confusing.

I thought he was going to be sick for longer than that—I don’t know, just seemed like something you would do.

Nice to see Joseph and his family mentioned again. I m…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @keilah-h

What did I just come back to? Why do you all want me to beat up Everett? 🥺

Huh, weird. The tag box underneath the message one doesn’t do anything.

Test

@keilah-h

Weird. I’ll have to look into it—I really don’t know if it’s a great option or not, but I remembered it.

I do also know that if you create a website on Blogger or Wix, something like that, I think there’s an option to create a forum. I’ve never tried it before, but I could look into it if y’all would prefer that to a closed chat.

It would still technically be open to people on the internet, but the link would have to be shared for them to acces…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay! 😁

@ellette-giselle

That’s because you don’t know his full story.

I know his life, and I know that it was the completion of his character arc.

Well, okay, maybe. 😝

technically I should make you wait for tomorrow…….. but I am feeling rather nice today………

*gasps* A bonus section?

@ellette-giselle

😂

That’s crazy. Colorado is kind of notorious for that, I thought, but I’ve never been to your state before.

I don’t kill characters without a reason. I don’t even kill them. My badguys do.

Ahem—I don’t see much of a reason for Conrad’s death. Aaron and Adrian can be explained, I guess, but there’s still lots of other people yo…[Read more]