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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Aww. Good section. I’m so glad Leon didn’t die.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Guys…I haven’t signed up for CEW yet….. 🫣
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Yeah, but if there’s a lot of plants, chances are there’s a lot of animals surviving off of that, which means the wolves shouldn’t be having much trouble finding food.
You could just take out this sentence:
The wolves growled, but they were hungry, and they decided the threat was worth the potential kill. The winter had been…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Ok sounds good!
I would, but I’m focusing on writing and not editing for these next few months.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Also I just had an idea. What if, as Chase got closer to certain people, he started associating them in his mind with different animals depending on their personality? Could be a way he gets more comfortable around some people. Just an idea though. You can use if you want or not.
That is an awesome idea! And it sounds just like something…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I’m game 🙂
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
That sounds like fun! I’m not exactly sure how busy I’ll be this summer, but I’d love to join in. The next few weeks are going to be kind of crazy though.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Oh no!!! Not Leon!!
Good section. One thing I noticed was that you mentioned that the people were able to find a lot of food during the winter… then you said that it had been hard on everyone, especially the wolves. I get that they eat meat and not plants, but it was kind of confusing.
otherwise, good job! 😬
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Ruth posted an update 1 year ago
Funny, isn’t it, how when humans find something beautiful, their eyes quickly find the single blemish. Instead of enjoying the beauty, they focus on that one blemish, and suddenly that thing is no longer so beautiful anymore to them.
Is it right to look only at the blemish? No, I don’t think so. Is it right to look only at the beauty? No, I…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Sorry that I haven’t been active. I wasn’t sure what to rp, and there was alot of life stuff I was working with.
Chase
Chase shook his head. “Wha-what t-teach-er g-gives t-tree l-less-ons?” Besides, if you want to climb trees, you can talk to squirrels about it. They can tell you all kind of things about the different kind of trees…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Didn’t get much done, lol. Got distracted by looking at movie times with my brother XD
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Esther replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Ope, almost forgot, going toooo…. :50
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Esther replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Sprinting to hopefully do something writing related… I haven’t really written since the end of March 🫣🫣
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I know, I’m sorry. 😞 It would have been cool to maybe meet you in person.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Yes, we were able to get a rental in the other state, not Indiana.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Ahh. Yeah, I get what you mean.
I think so. Not totally sure yet, but my mom’s talked to the tutors there, and we’re thinking that we will. I don’t know if Challenge 4 will be as fun as Challenge 3, though. @whalekeeper, what did you think of Ch4?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
😝
Remind me again what the prompt was? I can barely remember.
@whalekeeper @ducktator
Nice. Yeah, saying goodbye was sad, but I’m kinda glad it’s over.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
When does y’all’s CCs end? Ours ended yesterday.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Yay!! They finally found shelter!
Good transitioning scenes. I feel bad for the woman and the kids though.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Good section. I don’t have much to say about it. The stakes are rising.
“How are you boys holding up?”
“Fine, but we’re freezing,” Rolf said.
This took me back to that one scene with the soldiers… 😳 I was like, “Oh no.”
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