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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@theducktator @keilah-h @whalekeeper @grcr
I just released a new chapter…(chapter 35) and I’d just like some thoughts on it lol
so if you want to read it…
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
Probably either Leon or Julian. I’m going to say Leon for this book.
~ Were there any characters that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?
Umm . . . For some reason I’m thinking of Fox, since he was the…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
He ended up marrying the daughter of a farmer that he helped. Mercy grew up and married and had children, and so did most of the other children, though their fifth, Allan, died when he was fifteen.
🥺
Thank you!
Also, Linus had a point. We never found out who wrote that note (I know you just said it was an acolyte, but maybe…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
*reads over questions briefly*
Oh, never mind. I see you already added those. 😝
I’m sad that the series is over. This was fun.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Okay, I’ll try to answer them after I eat breakfast.
Okay, I’m tempted to say something that’ll make y’all kill me.
Lemme guess. Questions for the overarching series or something like that?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
THANK YOUUU (:
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
I need to think a little more, and I’ll be sure to tag you when I have something!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Thanks girl! IT HAS BEEN A WHILE!!!!! I’ve missed you *hugs*
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
First of all, girl, I love you so much 😂😂💜😭
You’re the best and your personality is actually such a vibe hahaha
I appreciate you so much, you make me smile <3
The thing is, if I make myself write as a routine, it will seem like a chore. Plus life is very crazy and uncertain because of all the stuff with my mom and I don’t want to…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @theducktator
Thank you so much <3
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Word.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
We were able to get it to work, thankfully! 😅
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
I tried to send them to your emails. So for you, it’s the Proton one.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint
Okay, I’m sorry, that was a bit of a mess. I tried to send a Word document with the two new chapters in it because Ellette can’t do Google anymore. There are two (?) links I sent. The right one is the second one, without a message.
Hopefully this works.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Yes, I was going to say, I can probably switch them over to Word. I believe you can comment anonymously on there if you aren’t signed in. Just give me a couple minutes.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Oh wait, can you even edit? 🤦♀️
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Huh. I don’t know how I could fix that.
I could open a section of it specifically for comments, and y’all could write them out instead of linking them to a specific section of text, but I feel like that might be more annoying for other people. Maybe I can copy any major ones over for you.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Pretty please, with a cherry on top, tell me what happens to Joseph and his family. 🙃
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Nice.
@ducktator @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint
New chapters are out. I wrote this week, so I feel like I have enough room to give you guys two.
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