Brianne

@theshadow

Okay, I’m all caught up (also was gone for a while), and this is a really engaging story. I did feel sad when Tyler was gone, so good job there, and I like how everything is going.

Thank you so much!!

A few things, I’ve noticed you used something along the lines of “(Character’s name) hated…” to describe what they were feeling, so…

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@theducktator

Praying!

I got to eat a beef hot dog today 🎉

@theshadow

Nice to see you back! (Ha, I know I’ve already talked to you, but still. ;))

I’m not sure I’ll be able to commit to another full project right now, but I might pop in occasionally. So glad you were able to figure out some more stuff this time around, though!

lol, yes!

@ellette-giselle

Here’s the last story as it is now. I made a few changes during CEW, but I don’t think I made many

A breeze swept over the countryside, traveling over the hills and through the meadows, before stopping to tangle a young woman’s hair at the command of the man who sat in the grass beside her.

“Baron! Why?” She whined, trying to st…

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not chapter, story *facepalm*

@ellette-giselle

If you want, I would be happy to mark that chapter up for you and give a few spots where it felt emotionally lacking to me as the reader.

That’d be great! I already have made some changes to the first part of the chapter, so I’ll head over to The Baron Chronicles topic and repost the chapter.

@ellette-giselle

np

but I honestly really liked that chapter the way it is. Like, a LOT. I don’t want you to touch it. If it’s the chapter I’m thinking of (the end one) it was one of my very favorites.

Yes, the end one. This is very interesting to me, cuz I honestly like the last short story the least. Not because of the story itself (the conce…[Read more]

@theducktator

Oh no. Praying!!

@whalekeeper @keilah-h

Would it help if I did a test piece and posted it on here so you can kinda see what it’d look like?

If I do that, I’ll probably do it tomorrow

TO ANYONE INTERESTED IN THE CHALLENGE i ATTEMPTED TODAY

I lost track of my hours, but I did get through most the Baron Chronicles. I didn’t get into the short story…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Like, people go on and on about how he was basically “The Perfect Fiction Writer,” do they realize he was just a guy who was SUPER passionate about his story?

I think his passion is what made him the best fantasy author. If Tolkien didn’t love writing, and didn’t love the story, then it wouldn’t have been a classic. It wouldn’t have bee…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Yep, basically burnt out. And easily distracted XD. Three more stories. I dragged my feet in the last one.

@ellette-giselle

Honestly, you were one of the main people I had in mind when I decided to go for it. I LOVED your book and it meant so much. People need to be able to read stuff like it, but honestly it’s so hard to get p…

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@ellette-giselle

Wait really!!!!!??? You might be going with us?!?!?!

I looked into like twenty different publishers today, some briefly, some a little more in-depth. The only two I liked were yours and one that I can’t even submit my book too so…yeah, I’m probably gonna go with you. To be honest, you weren’t my first choice (just a bookmarked…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I mean, I love these characters.

So they must suffer, right? 🙄 Lol.

@jonas

I’ll try to check it out! It sounds cool, but I don’t know if I’m ready to sign up for reading another project right now. I’m sure there are some people on here who would, though!

Throwing out some tags…

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @theshadow @thearcaneaxiom

@ellette-giselle

I still feel like Jonathan’s brother might not be dead, but I know you tried to quench that.

Jonathan was pretty smart, and the Agents wanted him before, so they might try to get him to work for them. Or something. Maybe use Michael as leverage. Or they want them to help them defeat the rebels by taking information… 🫣

@ellette-giselle

They should be on there, but it might take a minute. Sometimes I have to reload mine for it to work.

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @whalekeeper @theshadow

New chapters!

What are you doing to them?!

No, this is actually really interesting… I wonder what the Agents want with them. Probably nothing good.