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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 18 hours ago
That sounds like fun! I’m not exactly sure how busy I’ll be this summer, but I’d love to join in. The next few weeks are going to be kind of crazy though.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 20 hours ago
Oh no!!! Not Leon!!
Good section. One thing I noticed was that you mentioned that the people were able to find a lot of food during the winter… then you said that it had been hard on everyone, especially the wolves. I get that they eat meat and not plants, but it was kind of confusing.
otherwise, good job! 😬
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Ruth posted an update 6 days, 8 hours ago
Funny, isn’t it, how when humans find something beautiful, their eyes quickly find the single blemish. Instead of enjoying the beauty, they focus on that one blemish, and suddenly that thing is no longer so beautiful anymore to them.
Is it right to look only at the blemish? No, I don’t think so. Is it right to look only at the beauty? No, I…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 9 hours ago
Sorry that I haven’t been active. I wasn’t sure what to rp, and there was alot of life stuff I was working with.
Chase
Chase shook his head. “Wha-what t-teach-er g-gives t-tree l-less-ons?” Besides, if you want to climb trees, you can talk to squirrels about it. They can tell you all kind of things about the different kind of trees…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 16 hours ago
Didn’t get much done, lol. Got distracted by looking at movie times with my brother XD
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Esther replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 17 hours ago
Ope, almost forgot, going toooo…. :50
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Esther replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 17 hours ago
Sprinting to hopefully do something writing related… I haven’t really written since the end of March 🫣🫣
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 18 hours ago
I know, I’m sorry. 😞 It would have been cool to maybe meet you in person.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 18 hours ago
Yes, we were able to get a rental in the other state, not Indiana.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 19 hours ago
Ahh. Yeah, I get what you mean.
I think so. Not totally sure yet, but my mom’s talked to the tutors there, and we’re thinking that we will. I don’t know if Challenge 4 will be as fun as Challenge 3, though. @whalekeeper, what did you think of Ch4?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 19 hours ago
😝
Remind me again what the prompt was? I can barely remember.
@whalekeeper @ducktator
Nice. Yeah, saying goodbye was sad, but I’m kinda glad it’s over.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 20 hours ago
When does y’all’s CCs end? Ours ended yesterday.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 22 hours ago
Yay!! They finally found shelter!
Good transitioning scenes. I feel bad for the woman and the kids though.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
Good section. I don’t have much to say about it. The stakes are rising.
“How are you boys holding up?”
“Fine, but we’re freezing,” Rolf said.
This took me back to that one scene with the soldiers… 😳 I was like, “Oh no.”
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 1 day ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 1 day ago
Wow. That was rough.
Poor Aelic. 😭
(I’m wondering what’s happening to Aiden now that Martin believed and died too. It would have been tough to see his brother and his cousin killed like that.)
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Trailblazer replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
Quote dump:
“You’re really sweet, like a strawberry. Like the juice of a strawberry.” (overheard from one coworker to another)
“You want to know what I really want to do? I want to hide in that empty tomb on the stage at church and pop out at the end of the service to surprise everybody.” (my 30-year-old cousin)
“I wish I could lick my gloves.”…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
Lolol.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
Haha! I like Aelic too, but I really liked how you put us more in Julian’s mind than we normally get to be.
I’m like 95% sure they’re going to survive.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
Love this section! You did a great job of bringing in Julian’s character and his thoughts, like when he remembered the burning building. Their last exchange is so funny. XD
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