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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I have not. Thanks for reminding me about it, lol.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Nope! You just told me I could only put a few of them in my signature, plus the 100 character limit, and that was when I was trying to convince you to save Eric. I can try to fit them all in, or I’ll just write “all of Ellette’s charries” if that’s what you prefer. 🤗😉
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@ellette-giselle Looks good!
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Esther replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
I love that!! I love how you can see so much personality in each person! <33
So cuteee! Yesss, she needs to become a new character!!
That looks soo good!!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Gotcha. Yeah, no problem. He did faint, so there obviously was enough blood lost for that. You’re good! So, does this mean you’ll have to rewrite a lot of what you already have, or not much since you’re about to have Joseph leave?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Overall, it was pretty good. Some of the dialogue towards the end felt a tiny bit clunky, though.
Very well,”” Eric sighed. “I shall bare the displays of emotion for tonight, but by tomorrow hugs will be limited to once a month.”
This is funny, but it sounds old-fashioned all of a sudden. Is Eric just teasing? Does he lapse i…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
1. It gives the reader more hope in a happy ending.
2. It’s more interesting because you play on the past events of the book to make readers think Asher and Eric will die, but then defy the stereotype, keeping them on their toes.
3. It saves Asher and Eric. 🤗
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
YES! Much better. Thanks so so much!
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Yay! An excuse to talk about Andrew!!!!!!!
- He’s really really really adorable, and I will not hear otherwise!
- He has the best smile EVER, EVER
- He likes nicknames apparently (really adorable)
- He’s the most gentlemanly guy you’ll ever meet
- He thinks his jokes are stupid when they’re actually hilarious (I just…
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Esther replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Ok! Thanks for the offer! 🤗
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Trailblazer replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
HIIIIII!!!! Glad you’re back!! I was thinking about you the other day! Good to know you’re alive lol! 😁
Lol glad I’m still alive, too!
Yeah I’m doing pretty well! I hope you are, too!
Hi welcome back! It’s good to see you too. Makes me happy when older KPers come back <3
I don’t even feel like an old KPer but I gue…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Question about religion in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 8 months ago
Everyone else had some fantastic points and I agree. God does everything with a purpose, and one of those purpose is to bring glory to His name. The angels were made to do God’s will and serve Him, right? Satan didn’t want to, yet time and time again we see Satan’s plans thwarted and God glorified. I like how Andrew put it:
God knew…
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Trailblazer replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Hey peoples…
I’m back!
It’s been a long hiatus, and I don’t know how active I’ll be on here going forward, but at least I’m not basically nonexistent anymore.
For those who have joined KP since June, welcome, and I hope to officially meet you soon! And for those of you who were around before, it’s good to “see” you again.
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Ruth changed their profile picture 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
My older sister used to raise rabbits!
we raise silver fox rabbits!
I had an allergy to beef for a while, so we started raising rabbits for meat. Though, now they’re basically pets.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
YESSSSSS!!! We convinced you!!! 🙌🙌
Thank you, thank you, thank you!! I can’t wait to see the new scene! 😁
having hybridlore on the protection squad is scary! Why did I ever tell her about it?
Because you wanted me to kidnap all your characters. MWAHAHAH.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
*graciously accepts confetti and medal* Thank you, thank you very much.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@koshka YES. Thank you.
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