Brianne

@the_lost-journal

But I was thinking… Maybe I… uhh… unofficially quit KP?

I’ll miss you on here, but I hope it will help you to have one less thing to stress about!

Wow, your story is interesting, can’t wait for Part 4!

@savannah_grace2009

Sure!

Um…though Chase is in the hospital rn…

@savannah_grace2009

I have not been active on this RP in forever, but I’m willing to join back in if you want to pick it back up again for our charries! :))

@theducktator

That does not sound fun at all. 😖 Praying! 🙏🏻 Make sure you’re also eating and drinking well. (That may or may not be the cause, I’m not a doctor, lol)

Thanks for the prayers everybody! 🤗

They held the funeral today. I wasn’t there for the whole thing but it was good to get in contact with his oldest daughter (the one I know the best). Just please continue praying for them. Grief is a journey and the sadness never really fully goes away. There’s a joy in knowing he’s with the Lord, but know…[Read more]

Praying. 🙏

@the-ducktator That’s okay! I’m glad it wasn’t terrible. Sorry you got a cold, though.

@rae @esther-c

I really miss this RP…is it still going??? And is there any way that I can bring Sef and Liv back…? 👀👀👀

@trailblazer

That is so cool!!!! That sounds amazing!!!!!

@loopylin

Thank you so much <333

Yesssss! I ate too much food lol

@jonas

Oh okay!

That’s not the reason anymore I guess 😂 I actually forgot I said that…a lot has changed lol

That makes sense though, I understand what you’re saying!

Oh, and as for why I changed the ending instead of them abandoning Lilitu…

There are a couple reasons why I did that. Maybe they’re not good reasons lol but I’m going to leave it, at least for now so I can play with it. I think it will make the story make a little bit more sense  in the future so I’m just going to leave it for now.

@hybridlore

Thank youuu!

@highscribe

I think this is really good! You have some really nice prose.

Thank you so much!

I corrected the things you suggested and you’re right, I think it will flow a lot better! Thank you so much, you have been very helpful! <3

@jonas

I think I asked before why he insisted on this, and you said that it was to sweeten the deal for Kaden. Personally, I feel like you should show Kaden as having more hesitation if this is going to work. To me, it seems like they have already made up their minds to become Pythonos. Sure, they’re scared, but to me, it still doesn’t convey a s…

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@jonas @highscribeofaetherium

Oh my goodness you guys are so good!!!!

I actually have noticed a couple of the things you’ve said before but for some reason I forgot to change them… *facepalm* I’ll go fix them now before I forget again lol!

@savannah_grace2009

Yay, another section! 😆 It looks good! I don’t have too much to say about, but I thought Jonas’s critiques were good.

@savannah_grace2009

I’ve been doing pretty well! I don’t know if you’ve heard of YWAM (Youth With a Mission), but I just got back from a 5-month discipleship training school (DTS), which is why I haven’t been active on here. The first three months were training- a lot of teachings on things like the character and nature of God, hearing God’s…[Read more]

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