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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@anyone-who-is-interested
Chapter 1
Strong hands grabbed at her shoulders, trying to rip her away.
But Sef wouldn’t let go.
Eyes scrunched shut, tears leaking from the corners, she clung to her father like he was the only thing keeping her life together.
In a way, he was.
And now he was leaving.
“Let go, Sef,” her mother said stern…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 6 months ago
@the_lost-journal This sounds like a super cool idea! Unfortunately, I don’t think I’ll participate this time—I’m already not really keeping up with the fantasy RP—but I may check in on it to watch what happens.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
@grcr Praying as well!! *virtual hug* 🤗
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@raxforge @theshadow @freed_and_redeemed @the_lost-journal
Ah! You all hit me with a snowball!
So I wrote a short story
The True Magic of Christmas
December 25th, 1914.
I dread the date. Usually I would be at home, home with little Henry and Mum, but not this year. I will miss them more than usual tomorrow. Oh, if only this war had never…
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Esther replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
I agree with what hybrid and highscribe said. Definitely consider the length and genre of your book first. If your novel is only going to be 60-70k, I would definitely hesitate adding more POV characters cuz then they each only get 10-15k each and that’s really not a lot in the big scheme of things.
Also consider if each c…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh no, my prayers will definitely be with you and your family. 🙏🏻 Sending virtual hugs your way! 🫂💕
“fear not, for I am with you; be not dismayed, for I am your God; I will strengthen you, I will help you, I will uphold you with my righteous right hand.”
Isaiah 41:10 “I sought the Lord, and he answered me and delivered me from…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
And blond guy.
If this was meant to refer to Baron, he has white hair. Though, right now it will look silver because of the moon
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@raxforge @loopylin @grcr @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @jonas
Baron (Brutus)—Group 1, about to follow Fel.
“My name isn’t Baron!” Brutus hissed, pushing Flare away. “Whatever you think you saw, you were wrong!”
Brutus’s attention was then caught by the girl who he was going to follow, He took her “try to keep up” as a little…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh no… PLEASE don’t tell me you are going to be an annoying couple were you just do PDA on KP?????
(please no.)
No, KP isn’t the place for that kind of stuff.
I was a little out of line when I made my statement, I apologize.
I’ll refrain from those type of statements, but I’m not changing my forum signature.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@raxforge @whalekeeper @jonas @grcr @hyrbidlore @loopylin
Baron (Brutus)—with Group one for now
“Spell, what spell?” Brutus liked almost frantic, emotion finally seeping into his voice. “What have you done?!”
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
, I have thought of a NEW idea that seems like a lot of fun! If anyone is interested I will tell them!
I’m interested….
CONGRATS!!!! (Idk why, its kind obv tho… I always thought you guys would just be friends… not a couple! lol)
Actually…Andrew officially joined KP five days before be admitted he had a crush on me..…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@raxforge @jonas @loopylin @ellette-giselle @grcr @hybridlore @whalekeeper
Baron (Brutus)—with Group 1
Brutus froze in his tracks as Flare used his true name. “Wh-what did you just c-call me?” Brutus went as blank as a sheet, almost as if he was going to pass out.
I have no preference of where exactly Jenna goes
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Early 1900s Research in the forum Historical 1 year, 6 months ago
Yeah sorry, I don’t have anything.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Early 1900s Research in the forum Historical 1 year, 6 months ago
Oooh, history? I love history, but unfortunately for you, most of my research has been 1700’s/1800’s. I can see if I have any articles or websites bookmarked that might have information for you, though.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@ellette-giselle I love that idea too!! 🥰
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hybridlore replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
It really depends. Does each MC have their own POV? How long is the series, and what genre is it? Typically a long, multi-book series will have plenty of characters, while a standalone may only have room for a few. (However, Gordon Korman is a big exception to this rule. He writes mostly standalone contemporary MG fiction, but he…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Caught up on my snowballs!
Nowwww….
@lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed @godlyfantasy12 SNOWBALLLSSSSS!!!
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Thanks!! <3 :))
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Esther replied to the topic Early 1900s Research in the forum Historical 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh dear, I love studying history, but I normally don’t go out of my way to find big books about it 😂 But I’ll do some looking and see if I can find anything that you might find helpful. :))
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Guys I’ll catch up on my snowballs later today I promiseeee
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