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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 7 months ago
@jonas
I need help.
So, Andrew (otherwise known as Raxforge) said he would like it if I could play a piano song called Quiet at Dawn by Galen Rise. It’s a beautiful piece, that sounds in my skill range, but I can’t find any sheet music for it (it only has a little over 900 views on YouTube).
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Also, I just saw what you said to Linus about Liam not being a Christian. Then how does Sabina’s statement make sense?
Sabina smiled through tears. “He is happy now. Much happier and safer than I could have ever made him, and much more loved than I could have ever loved him.”
Also, I don’t know if an orphan who hasn’t had a family for a long time…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Good section! I was going to say, it seems weird that Beric would change so quickly, but now I see he’s still going to struggle.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
YESSSSS!!!
Okay sounds good!!!!! Are you still writing your story? you should resend me the link, I’ve always loved your story! <3
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
OH! Ellette, you’re gonna be so happy… ( @theducktator and @grcr might also want to know this)
I have a recent development…
Cass is no longer going to be playing with Sef’s feelings.
He’s officially a nice guy again hahaha
Since Lilitu and Sef are separated for a good chunk of the book, there’s no opportunity for this to happen. Cass is…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle @anyone-else
Next chapter!!!
What am I doing?
Frustration built up in Lilitu’s chest until he wanted to scream.
But he couldn’t scream….or else Adar would find him.
Cass isn’t going to come bail you out this time, he pressed his lips together in a thin line. You have to figure it out yourself.
He tried to find a comfort…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I will!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Okay great!!! hahaha!
Really??? That makes me really happy!!!! Thank you!!!! <3
Speaking of Eloy, I just wrote a funny Eloy scene (it’s kind of cheesy I think, but I’m going to edit it later.) I’ll post it in a little bit!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle @jonas (let me know if I’m tagging you too much, I know you’re probably busy!!!!) this goes for anyone else too, please let me know if you’d like me to stop tagging you lol @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else
Here’s a second half of the Lilitu chapter:
(Again, this is unedited so this won’t be the finished product, this is…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
First of all, I don’t know if you had planned for Lilitu to have any more lasting injuries than some cuts and bruises, but from the level of beating he’s just received, he’s likely to have some cracked or broken ribs (which could damage internal organs), and/or a concussion. And if he was knocked out/unconscious for long…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
I will get to this in juuuuust a second. I think Ruth is on a Christmas trip because she hasn’t appeared in a while.
Actually, I had nothing to post for a few days so I kinda just forgot about KP, and took a break… now I’m back with drawings Andrew really wants me to post, and writings about Baron, and 77 notifications and loads a…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 7 months ago
I’m so sorry if I miss you, I have a lot of posts to go through, and it’s Christmas so 1) MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!!!! and 2)I might not be able to read and reply to everything until tomorrow
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 7 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Free will in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
You’re welcome! Cool, so am I. That’s what I figured, but I wasn’t sure.
Merry Christmas!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
The beginning has changed SO. MUCH.
The storyline/plot is pretty similar, but it’s definitely different…
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hybridlore replied to the topic Free will in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
Thank you. I really like that answer… it’s so true and the way he worded it is beautiful also.
Merry Christmas to you too!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Free will in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
Thank you for sharing that experience Hybrid, though I haven’t necessarily dealt with these same trials, I do know pain and doubt. I don’t want to force myself into this conversation, but I just wanted to say that God is aware of you both, and He wants to end your suffering, but there is a plan in all things. Anxiety is…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Free will in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
Do you mind me asking if you are a boy or a girl? (Not to offend you or anything—I just couldn’t tell by your profile pic.)
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Sure! I think it will be doable. I gave it a listen to see what it’s like, and it sounds like it shouldn’t be too difficult. It’s a nice song! I got the first couple lines written without much difficulty, so I should be able to do the whole thing, although I don’t know how long it might take.
Okay, thank you so much! This means a lot to me.
If you would like my help in any way, plz reach out. If you’d like, I can give you my email.
Thank you again!
No problem! Honestly, it’ll be good for me to have something to do, since I’m on break until the 21st and will probably get pretty bored. I will be on vacation this week, so I probably won’t get too much done on it until I get back, btw.
Email would probably be a good idea, since I don’t think KP lets you share files (except for images.) Mine is…[Read more]
I haven’t gotten too much time to work on this, but I’m getting onto a better schedule this week, so I should start making faster progress. I’ll email you the PDF of what I have so far just so you can see it. Let me know if you think there are any mistakes. My ear is not perfect.