@sparksaraabbott11
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic HELP WITH A SCENE PLZZZZ!!! in the forum Plotting 3 years, 10 months ago
@koshka ooh good question…
hmm…thinking about her right now…
(see…I have that “author” perspective where I see the character’s future self and how they are now XD) so in the future she’d be more up front and in control of her self, but right now, I believe she’s in such a state of turmoil in this scene that she’d lash out verbally.
But…due…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic HELP WITH A SCENE PLZZZZ!!! in the forum Plotting 3 years, 10 months ago
it did the spacing weird. As in non-existent XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic HELP WITH A SCENE PLZZZZ!!! in the forum Plotting 3 years, 10 months ago
“November!” Ara shifted as she fell, reaching to pull him down with her, but her fingers just brushed the edge of his shirt. Her back hit the floor and she gasped, the breath knocked from her lungs. Her body ached from the impact but she ignored it, scrambling to get to her feet.
Too late.
“No!” Ara reached for her friend, just as the bird’s…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic HELP WITH A SCENE PLZZZZ!!! in the forum Plotting 3 years, 10 months ago
I can actually submit the scene if you’d like. Might be easier lol.
it’s short and it starts from where November is injured.
(Background Corvina can turn into a Raven at will, and November pushed Ara out of the way to take Corvinas blow)
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic HELP WITH A SCENE PLZZZZ!!! in the forum Plotting 3 years, 10 months ago
And thank you!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic HELP WITH A SCENE PLZZZZ!!! in the forum Plotting 3 years, 10 months ago
November, her and Corvina
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Need Some Advice With An Injury Scene! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic HELP WITH A SCENE PLZZZZ!!! in the forum Plotting 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 ur tag kept glitching
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic HELP WITH A SCENE PLZZZZ!!! in the forum Plotting 3 years, 10 months ago
SOOO apparently this is where you go for stubborn scenes lol!!
AND I know I’ve already posted a question for help with an injury, well I’ve kinda gotten some help online with that so…but anymore help in that thread I’d appreciate as well, also feel free to ask ur own questions and such.
ANYWAY!! I am rlly trying to write because it’s be…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Need Some Advice With An Injury Scene! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
UGH it won’t let me post it. But I found an awesome website with a whole entire list of injuries and even environmental stuff like cold and heat for writing and, It tells you if it would be fatal and such!
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Lydia S. started the topic Inspo Exchange in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Hey, ya’ll!
Lydia, here. 🙂 So, I thought it’d be fun to start an inspiration exchange thread!
This is a place where we can all dump interesting photos or dialog prompts we happen to find or come up with, and it’s also somewhere where we can resort to if we need inspiration! Post as many prompts/pictures as you’d like, but please make sure they…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Need Some Advice With An Injury Scene! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
HEYO!!! Wasn’t sure where to put this thread XD But I need some advice with writing an injury infliction scene!! (I’m also gonna use my pal google, but thought u guys might could help out too!)
SO! I am working on my draft of book 1 of my series, and in it, my female MC (Arabella’s) All Is Lost moment is when my male MC (November) is injured by…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Ezra glanced at her.
Gave her a small, soft, sweet smile. “Eva…you save my life every day.”
THOSE LINES.
I’M DEAD. YOU’VE OFFICIALLY KILLED ME.
GOODBYE.
Yeah, those were pretty great…
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Ezra…
*broken-hearted sniffles*
And I’m with @koshka on this one… It’s good Ezra’s attackers are fictional… XDXD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@queen_of_alvastia @freedomwriter76
Corvina
Verity obviously wanted to converse.
Corvina sighed internally. She honestly wasn’t interested, but…the kid was upset, and Corvina had to grin at her spunk.
“Well…not much we can do about it now.” Corvina shrugged. Verity huffed and crossed her arms.
Corvina spotted a flash of something cross the…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
ah sorry about the confusion with Crow!! Also luv Crosshair and Jareth together! It’s fun seeing stoic Crosshair with a son! Definitely got some explaining to do 😂
anyone else wanna RP?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
November
Everyone seemed to notice Franz’s sudden change of behavior when Naja entered the room. How he didn’t seem quite as gruff as before. How he acted so differently with her compared to how he had with….Well…
Everyone else.
It was….strange….
And November didn’t fully grasp it.
Per…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic *Sigh* Here we go again, Tony & Steve…XD in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Awwwww!!!!! AND HE LOVES LOKI?! AGH MA HEART!!!! He even looks similar to a Loki! A mini trouble maker in the making!!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @queen_of_alvastia
Corvina
She’d wanted to take up the back, but apparently that wasn’t going to bode well with a group of courageous men…
She rolled her eyes as she walked beside them, bristling everytime someone came close. She sighed.
While she’d been against bringing Sorren along, she couldn’t exactly stop anyone from doin…[Read more]
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