@sparksaraabbott11
Active 1 year, 7 months ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Help, I Don't Understand Keepers of the Lost Cities in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 6 months ago
@folith-feolin @whalekeeper yea I get it, still my fav series tho! Lol!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Keeper of the Lost Cities in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@arien I understand 😊
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Help, I Don't Understand Keepers of the Lost Cities in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper also as for her mentioning Tolkien in her works pretty sure she did that out of a love for him and wanting to mention him in their, just like she did with Batman XD XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Help, I Don't Understand Keepers of the Lost Cities in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 6 months ago
@whalekeepe @folith-feolin
Wellll….
I don’t read Harry Potter due to the witchcraft.
I also haven’t read Lord of the rings (I started the Hobbit buuuut yea I never finished it XD)
as for elves being “copy and pasted” sometimes there’s only so much you can do with them. And I guess I don’t understand that considering….…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Keeper of the Lost Cities in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@arien ah I didn’t think of that. Doesn’t bother me really, as I’m not gonna be breaking rules anytime soon but I totally see ur point!
but it helped that their rules were totally stupid and I was rooting for her the whole time XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@loopylin thanks!! So I’d already had the idea of her ppl being destroyed by dragons because I’d realized a long time ago
Wait a min…I’m writing fantasy and there’s NO MENTION OF DRAGONS?!?!
and I was like yea, no XD
but wasn’t sure if that really worked, but then I was looking up pictures, yes pictures lol, of elves and found some…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@loopylin XD!! Well, Pax knows that not everyone in the castle is from the same worlds, buuuut obviously he’s quiet and doesn’t realize others don’t know XD XD
And Luna’s like this even in her own world having lived LITERALLY under a rock most her life SOOOO XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I feel like he’s gonna be like WHAAT?! When he figures out Luna is an elf and has a bit of “powers” tho XD, tho she can’t really use them too well, and that Paxton is a Fae
since he thinks he’s the only one with magic I guess XD XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I rlly like Carter btw!! @loopylin
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Ahhh!!! This is so awesome writing from Luna’s POV!! Separating her from the others and having her with Paxton was such a great choice for Meh because she’s really the least developed character.
The last RP really helped me see a bit of her character and how she feels!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lughtoverdarkness6
Luna
“Do you know who did the magic?” The one named Carter asked, fist digging into his pocket, eyes focused intensely.
Luna’s lips pursed as she thought. Her mind wandered to the laughter of the dragon from before…
Dragons were known to be connected to the lands…to be able to sense shifts in…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@mineralizedwritings k! I think @lightoverdarkness6 and @loopylin is in bed rn so we’ll have to wait till tomorrow
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 up to y’all! Tho Easton provoking would definitely scare Paxton so that would be interesting.
ma poor traumatized baby (and don’t worry mineral if there’s going to be any flashbacks I’ll give warnings 😊)
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@koshka gasp I like that!! Idk who ur friend is but that’s awesome! I don’t wanna seem like I’m stealing anything but I might use that, it’s already kinda similar to what happens to him anyway (also because of what all has happened to him)
November
The…Maker.
He breathed in slowly, nodding. The Light One…r-right…
He…he’d care for Ara. The…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
@felicity @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
ahh now I can give advice!!!
so for the chili/hot sauce scenes and the difference of opinion between ppls, no view is wrong!
This actually is dependent on Light and the tone of her book!
So, before you go and change anything Light, you first just need to ask what the tone of your b…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@mineralizedwritings friends to lovers later down the road 😊 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6
Luna
She absentmindedly touched her hair, giving a small laugh. “It’s more of a…ombré I guess…I was born with it! Glad you like it,” she giggled, smiling from ear to ear. She’d never been around others similar to her until recently, having been raised…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Oh! And @esther-c
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 😊 u wanna RP Matt’s response? Lyla can also say something to Luna if u like.
@koshka u on?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
I just don’t really like critiquing ppl unless they ask for a certain thing and then Ik what to critique, or if I see a certain story element that doesn’t make sense
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