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@theshadow

If you post a trigger warning and the content isn’t too violent, it’s probably totally fine.

@stephie

I’m so sorry that happened! I’ll be praying for y’all!!

@ellette-giselle

Yes, I thought of you as a quieter girl. Lover of books. Long light/medium brown hair. Writer, friendly, softer spoke.

*shrug*

 

Not sure if any of that is true. (except I know the hair isn’t.)

I mean yeah, that sounds pretty accurate. I may be more talkative than you pictured, but everything else sounds right.

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@ellette-giselle

Wait a minute… so, what?? You’re introducing like a middle-East themed culture??

@liberty

You know who Lindsey Stirling is? Lol, yeah, I did have a picture of someone with a violin and like a library at some point, so that checks out.

@ellette-giselle

Feels like a battle vibe, but oh well. The Empire does do a lot of fighting, right? But Leon and Julian themselves wouldn’t really be a part of it probably.

I decide lots of things about people I don’t know because me mind likes to have a face to go with a name, and when I don’t have one, I view what I know as the building block…

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@ellette-giselle

Hah, you always say that whenever I guess at what’s going to happen. But you do try to throw me off a lot, so I’m just not going to listen. 😅

@ellette-giselle

I really like it!! I’m seeing a lot of battle, soldiers, and little girls… hmm… 🤔

@ellette-giselle

That’s fair. Lol

@ellette-giselle

Wow, you really do sound like Power. 😅

Good, I can’t wait to get to know them better since right now their personalities kind of blend together.

@ellette-giselle

Okay, I mostly like Julian to be honest. I don’t know much about Leon yet, but I’ll probably grow to like him too.

There wasn’t going to be a third and fourth book in the first place. There wasn’t going to be a second one for that matter.  But they wouldn’t shut up and let me move on. I believe that God wanted to say some more…

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@ellette-giselle

Oh no… oh no… Ellette, what are you going to do to them?? My poor Leon and Julian!! 😢

And we totally called that they were going to be the next leads. 😉

I love the title and the verse at the beginning too. I’m excited to see what happens next… 😬

Also I love that quote about “not to speak is to speak, not to act is to act.” I might steal that for Alec’s board.

@ellette-giselle

It looks great! Does he play the violin? 😁

@freed_and_redeemed

Aww, poor Riker. 🥺

@theshadow

I would consider getting out a blank doc or piece of paper and writing what you know about the story on it. Sometimes it’s definitely hard to know where to go after scenes, and knowing the main goal of your story and what’s going to happen will help. I used to just write whatever I felt like, but for TCOH I’ve actually figured out a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Awesome, thanks!!

@ellette-giselle @koshka @whalekeeper @theshadow

And y’all, you’re able to like, give me critiques for these. I just meant I didn’t need super precise, line-by-line edits since I’m going to rewrite this stuff eventually. So if you have input, please share it.

@theshadow

Thank you!!