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@ellette-giselle

Yay, the bonus section!! XD

The part where Julian says he has to stay in his room and then two sentences later says he might go downstairs was a little confusing.

I thought he was going to be sick for longer than that—I don’t know, just seemed like something you would do.

Nice to see Joseph and his family mentioned again. I m…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @keilah-h

What did I just come back to? Why do you all want me to beat up Everett? 🥺

Huh, weird. The tag box underneath the message one doesn’t do anything.

Test

@keilah-h

Weird. I’ll have to look into it—I really don’t know if it’s a great option or not, but I remembered it.

I do also know that if you create a website on Blogger or Wix, something like that, I think there’s an option to create a forum. I’ve never tried it before, but I could look into it if y’all would prefer that to a closed chat.

It would still technically be open to people on the internet, but the link would have to be shared for them to acces…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay! 😁

@ellette-giselle

That’s because you don’t know his full story.

I know his life, and I know that it was the completion of his character arc.

Well, okay, maybe. 😝

technically I should make you wait for tomorrow…….. but I am feeling rather nice today………

*gasps* A bonus section?

@ellette-giselle

😂

That’s crazy. Colorado is kind of notorious for that, I thought, but I’ve never been to your state before.

I don’t kill characters without a reason. I don’t even kill them. My badguys do.

Ahem—I don’t see much of a reason for Conrad’s death. Aaron and Adrian can be explained, I guess, but there’s still lots of other people yo…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, it’s acting up a little for me.

Thanks!! 😄

@ellette-giselle

Oh no! @liberty beat me! XD

yesterday it was 80 degrees.

Today it’s 5 and snowing.

That’s rather strange . . . 🤔 Sounds like Colorado, but I don’t even think it’s that extreme there. Today we have a high of nearly 80.

He died in the beginning of book 2. Hybridelore almost killed me for it.

(it was a rather brutal scene………

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@keilah-h

You’re totally fine. Thanks! 😁

And Everett’s . . .

This is Juliet’s.

@ellette-giselle

Does Everette have a board??? I want an Everette board!!!

I can post his and Juliet’s in a minute . . .

I hope one of them dies in the end.

Really? 🙄🤣

I’m also hoping Everette and Sara get married in the future. So… maybe he shouldn’t die.

I will reveal nothing . . . 🤭

@ellette-giselle

Yayyy!! They’re back! 🥰

This was a good section too.

The one that seems to be their leader is extremely bold, and he doesn’t seem to care what anyone says— or throws at him.”

Leon smirked, having a hard time stifling a laugh. He could guess who that was

Lol 🤣

Hi Julian, we’re back.”

This did seem a little out of place. I’m…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @theshadow @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator @koshka

Two new chapters this week! They should be uploaded to the doc now. Excited to hear what y’all think!

I’d be open to creating our own community. Slack would probably work for me, I’d have to check with my parents about Discord since I don’t have it yet. There’s also Group Me… which I don’t know much about, but plenty of youth groups seem to use it for announcements (not sure if you can create mini channels or anything like that.)

@ellette-giselle

Yep! I noticed that! 😆 “Teacher.” I like it.

@ellette-giselle

I love the way you put us inside Rolf’s story instead of having him just tell it. It worked so much better. Also, the transitions were great.

Good section. The part about Conrad was sad, though. I don’t really have any big critiques. Great job!