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@ellette-giselle

Yeah…. Totally. *shakes head vigorously *

His backstory. First time we get to hear what happened to him.

@ellette-giselle

Augh! Really??

Rick is not a nice guy. 😠 And poor Jim!!

I love the dynamics you have going.

@ellette-giselle

Lol.

I’m very curious to see what the rest of the book is like.

@ellette-Giselle

Hah! so there was a time jump!

Called it 😉

So the memories are coming back for Jonathan…

@ellette-giselle

I don’t know yet. 😂 Probably not great, but I mean at least the others are accepting him.

Okay!

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters! Nice to see Jonathan getting to see more of what the gang does. It seems like he’s becoming a full member.

@esther-c

I’ll be praying!! Have fun at volleyball!

@ellette-giselle

Aw, poor Jim. I liked this section.

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @linus-smallprint @whalekeeper @keilah-h

Two new chapters!

@whalekeeper

Wow. Poor Lucille.

@ellette-giselle

Got it.

@ellette-giselle

Jim giving Jonathan shoes. It was a sweet ending.

Ohh, right. But other people, maybe.

@ellette-giselle

Aww. That was sweet.

Jim seemed nicer to Jonathan before these chapters, but I guess Jonathan was hidden and Jim didn’t have to worry about the others watching.

Did the gang have something to do with Jonathan’s parents dying?

I will be sure to remember that on the next cliffhanger.

@ellette-giselle

True, true. 😆

@ellette-giselle

Oh wow. So you wrote those two this morning?

Darn. This means I can’t ask for bonus chapters. 😢 XD

@ellette-giselle

Wow. That’s a lot of drafts.

How far through this draft are you? Finished?

@ellette-giselle

You didn’t like it before? Lol.

So how much of this have you written?

It’ll be interesting to see what happens with Viper.

He’s a tough guy who takes in a little kid. Plus, he doesn’t seem to want to be there any more than Jonathan does.

@ellette-giselle

I like Jim more and more…

Good chapters! I really like this book.

@rae Praying!!