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@ellette-giselle

Good chapters!

Amber and James both have tough backstories…

@ellette-giselle

Evan’s story is crazy. He must sympathize with Jonathan a lot.

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters! The rebellion is reminding me of the church meetings in my story.

Jonathan’s adjustment is pretty realistic. He’s struggling, but wants to please the people who are teaching him despite himself.

I don’t really know why they can’t just let him go–that was a bit blurry for me. I know he was captured and taken…[Read more]

@rae

Aww, they sound adorable! Sir Fluffyface is such a cute name 🤣

Name them after characters. That’s always a solid choice. 😉

@linus-smallprint @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @whalekeeper

Four new chapters today! 😳

Don’t feel like you have to read them all right away if you don’t have time. This is the end of Part 2.

@ellette-giselle

I do agree with the people who commented on the end of this last chapter; there probably should be some more context before they teach him how to fight.

But I liked the training sessions. 🙂

@rae Oh, weird! I hope the blood tests/supplements are able to help. I’ll be praying!

@esther-c

Oh, gotcha! I’m glad it’s fixed!

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters!

@theducktator

So sorry! Being sick constantly is so annoying. I’ll be praying!

@esther-c @rae Any updates?

@ellette-giselle

Interesting. Are these the rebels?

I have no idea how Jonathan didn’t get shot, but good chapters.

It’s like rage quitting for readers! 😂

@ellette-giselle

Lolol.

See, I told you, people throw books across the room. If you had ended it there, definitely a book throwing moment.

@ellette-giselle

True.

I don’t know what I expected, but I wasn’t very surprised that the boy fought him. 314 must have been the exception.

@ellette-giselle

The cliffhanger!!!!!

I didn’t expect Jonathan to go chasing after the boy. I thought he meant like, I have to do something… long term. Not immediately. 😂

@ellette-giselle

What in the world!?

I can’t believe you.

Well, I guess I can, but still.

*pouts*

@ellette-giselle

Ugh… poor 314.

I’m still holding on to that guess though.

@ellette-giselle

Yes! Get Jim! Lol.

Just a guess. Can’t remember if we talked about this before, but I distrust characters’ “deaths” unless I get 100% proof that they’re dead because of all the “resurrections” in books, lol.

@ellette-giselle

Lol, yes, that may be stupid of Jonathan. But it makes a good story.

I kind of feel like 314 (was that the right number) isn’t really dead. We never got much evidence besides the Agent telling us he was. He could have easily run away or something. But we shall see.

Good chapters! Jim taking care of Jonathan was hilarious.

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint @keilah-h

It’s Tuesday again! Two new chapters on whichever document you prefer.

@ellette-giselle

Oh, lol.