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OH! And I have Hallie and Easton who I have not RPed for yet but will do so now…

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Easton

“So, are you glad you came? You seem very confident with that waltz now.”

“Yep!” Hallie flashed him her signature smile. “I’m glad you came along.”

Easton bobbed his head in a small laugh. “Anytime. But…” he peered over the heads of students. “Looks lik…[Read more]

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Peter gave a look of confusion which Pietro replied with a narrowing of his eyes. “They’re my chocolates.”

“Pietro.” Hannah gave the “look” that Pietro had known forever. “Let the kid have a chocolate.”

“These are rare Sokoivan chocolates, do you know how hard they are to find?”

“They’re hersheys just written in Sokovian,” Wanda argue…

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Thank you all for the nice comments and feedback, I’m taking everything into consideration and I’m thankful to have people who are willing to be honest and encouraging

😊

also to answer the most popular question, no this wasn’t the first chapter or anything, so all the characters would be properly introduced in the actual book

Ohh… I see…

@scoutfinch180 @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @freedomwriter76 @smiley @whalekeeper @loopylin @esther-c @calyhuge (idk what I’m doing I’m just typing tags, if you can tell XD) you may ignore

So, this is a short story i just revised after a year of leaving it in it’s awfulness. A couple spots are giving me trouble, so I’m gonna…[Read more]

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It was super interesting! I love family dynamics like this! I didn’t really have any critiques, but please tag me if you post more!

@smiley

Sorry I haven’t gotten to this yet! I’ll try my best to get a reply later today. (:

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Was this going to be the first chapter? I’m assuming if it’s not, that we would have already know a bit more about the family/characters, but there were a couple places I noticed that weren’t super clear about who a certain person was.

She was messing with Jason’s hat as Colton approached.

For example, right here, I had no idea who J…[Read more]

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Alrighty!! (I don’t know why this took me longer than necessary, but oh well lol 😅)

I really like it!! I like Payton and Jane a lot… and I think Jason interesting (and Colton too, actually)..

As far as it being boring, I don’t think so. It’s only the first chapter, right?

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Just a note, I really love this here:

“We we…

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I love the siblings’ relationship, and I also love Jason!! <3

@hybridlore

Yep!

Awesome!

Ev is obviously pretty reckless. He doesn’t seem to care about getting into danger, and I’m not really sure to describe his personality but he seems playful?

And Ami is sweet and responsible. She really cares about Ev and wants to protect him.

I think you just nailed them both in a few sentences. XD That’s exactly what…[Read more]

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Okay, I really have been working on this chapter a bunch, and I would like to know you’re guys’ thoughts! I know some of you guys have read this chapter, but I was wondering if you had any…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Awww, Erichhh! 😭

But he sounds like such a cool POV to write from. 👀

@mineralizedwritings

I always love reading your writing. 😊 I feel like writing in present tense in becoming more popular now, at least in ya fiction, and I really enjoy it. I tried it once for a short story and failed miserably. 😂 But I might try it in a…[Read more]

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Ok this is kinda long, if it looks familiar it’s a complete redo of a scene I posted awhile ago 🙂

I’m at exactly 24k now… progress is slow but going alright.

For those of you who don’t know, Aleshia is Lesli’s new boss but also the mother of her best friend, Tauren, so she grew up…[Read more]

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Oh thank you soooo much 😭😭 I’m so glad it’s not the ross I like

@smiley oh and yeah I love that fanfic idea!!

@smiley why must u sadden me about fictional characters

@freedomwriter76 noooooo whyyyyy

so confession: the thing that got me more interested in Bucky is because my brother makes for a PERFECT Winter Soldier cosplayer……

He has the long hair and everything, and even his face is almost the right shape.

@smiley there are two? Wow, I thought the two Ross dudes were the same person. I was wondering what caused the attitude change….

@freedomwriter76 somehow I was unaware that Everett Ross was universally liked by the Marvel community. I mean, he does have a lot going for him in terms of defending a country he’s not even from.

and awwww! Erich’s…[Read more]

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Thank you! I used a reference

@rae Thanks for the tips! I don’t think I have a scanner printer so I might just outline and color it digitally.

@whalekeeper

nooo they’re MY children