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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@jonas @rae @highscribeofaetherium
I really like how you started to introduce your villain like that.
Thanks!
That’s hilarious! Was it fake/unloaded? Or is he just being stupid?
No, he’s just throwing a tantrum and he’s kind of stupid.
Oh my 🤣🤣 Fracture is rather terrible at this XD
I know! He thinks he’s super scary and a terrifying villain, bu…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic My Fanfics in the forum Genre-Writing 2 years, 10 months ago
Oh, I like it! really intriguing!
I actually like how you wrote Bucky, I figured he was in a earlier stage of character development. It feels a bit like if he was interactive (rather than just taking orders) during the time period he was under hydra
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Compound Fracture
“You have no idea who you’re dealing with,” the man stared up with a grim determination in his eyes. With nimble fingers, he began to untie the knots of the rope pinning him to the chair.
“Oh!” Fracture let out a high pitched giggle, “Don’t I?” he cocked his gun, pointing it directly at his prisoner’s face. “Joke’s on you, I s…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I’m good to start the RP! Though I’ve been busy…so I might not be as active as you, Jonas (lol, homeschoolers are so lucky!) . But I’ll definitely pop in every once in a while!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
Oh my gosh…this is amazing! I love Blair <3
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
This looks really interesting!! I’m excited to see more of this, I think the characters have a lot of potential!
I think some of the dialogue from Blair seems a little forced, if that makes sense.
Mainly just this paragraph:
“I know, but I really hate the shallow conversations.” He moaned, “I never feel like I can express my opini…
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
Of course! Glad you like it!!
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Euodia replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
It looks awesome!! Thank you so much!! 😊
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Euodia replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Riya
“So, uhm, what are all of these people doing here?” Bucky asked.
“Everyone’s going shopping for the dance!” Riya said excitedly. “Well, the girls are going shopping for dresses and they’re kind of just dragging the guys along.”
Bucky laughed. “Sounds enjoyable.”
Riya’s eyes lit up and she grabbed his arm, “You should…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
XD Completely missed that Ev has two faceclaims. Whatever lol
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
Okay, here is it so far! Feel free to make any changes!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
THAT WAS DARLING 😭😭😭
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Euodia replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
(aww, the poor boi)
Riya
He was nervous.
She could tell that much.
She gave him a reassuring smile as he continued his question.
“I-I wanted to know if you wanted to…uh… maybe go to the dance with me…?”
“Oh…” She was unprepared for that question.
She didn’t think anyone would want to ask her to the dance.
But now t…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
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Euodia replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
OH MY GOODNESS I’M IN LOVE!!!!!!
Natasha and Yelena look amazinggggg
(And Bucky ofc 😆)
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Euodia replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Sure!!
Riya
“Well, I am off to my dorm to do some homework.” Tirion announced with a rigid salute.
Riya cast a glance down the hall where kids bustled excitedly out the main entrance, “You’re not going shopping with everyone?”
Tirion shivered, backing away slowly, “Me? Of course not! You know how I hate shopping and crowds.…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Oh, gotcha. lol 😂
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