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@ellette-giselle

Lolol. I got worried for a second… but I’m assuming it’s the main character who I said was similar to Adrian because he died in book 1 and so did his best friend… I think.

(I was worried for Joseph. At this point I don’t know how surprised I would be if you killed him off too. xD)

@freed_and_redeemed

Aww, so sweet! 🥹

@whalekeeper

Love it!! I love your writing style so much actually! I’m not sure what it is, but something about it makes it easy and engaging to read 🤩

@freed_and_redeemed

Love the aesthetics!!! They look so good!! 🤩

@ellette-giselle

*ahem* What main character are you talking about? 🤨

@ellette-giselle

Yess! 😁 Gotcha. I remembered seeing him in it, but not much. (I still gotta finish that. Did you post the whole thing on there, even the ending?)

*putting all the pieces together lol* Yeah, I could tell 😢😢.

@ellette-giselle

OH!!! This is the Leon from the RP!!!!

@ellette-giselle

Yayyyy!!!! Julian!!! And more people!! 😆

It looks good! I liked the flashbacks into Joseph’s backstory. The only thing was I caught a sentence or two that didn’t flow well— “It was evening of the next day.” for example. Maybe you could change it to, “it was the next evening?” Idk. I’m sure it’s fine if you leave it.

@the-ducktator

I’ll be praying! 🙏

@ellette-giselle Oops, I didn’t see your post.

@the_lost-journal

It’s okay, no one is going to hate you. Ellette wasn’t being serious about really kicking you off KP, and like she said, it’s hard to tell online whether someone is joking or not. I understand that you have a lot going on, but I think you over reacted. If you are hurt by something that someone says, maybe try to clarify what…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Lolol. And yeah, I can see what Koshka is saying, but that wasn’t really what I was thinking while I read it. I thought the scene was great.

@ellette-giselle

Ohh, I’m sorry. I didn’t know that was a rule. 😅

@ellette-giselle

Oof, yeah, I get that. It is one of the hardest parts about stories, but also one of the things that really makes you love the characters!

I thought it was pretty realistic that the boys would be quick to fight with each other because they are worn out and worried. Sabina’s idea to help them make up was pretty smart. And she g…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yep! lol. I read pretty fast sometimes, but it wasn’t that long of a section. Plus I saw pretty much as soon as you posted it. 😅

@ellette-giselle

Aww, I love it!!! 🥰

@raxforge @freed_and_redeemed

I mean, the topic is very broad. It could be as simple as showing the leaves of a tree withering and dying, or the spiritual death and resurrection of a new believer. It doesn’t necessarily mean you have to show someone dying–and even if you do, there’s a way to handle it in a way that doesn’t glorify…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Is this because the profile update links weren’t working?

@freed_and_redeemed

I love it! They are so sweet!!!

@the_lost-journal

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