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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
A fellow pantser!!! XD
Yeah, I write cliffhangers a lot, but also I can’t stop reading when I get to a cliffhanger, so… I’ll have to try that series again lol.
I’m working on Chapter 8, and have been for a few days but I’ve been kind of stuck at the ending. So you know, I’ll probably have it done at some point XD
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Q&A Forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Not sure if this will at all help, but here’s my approach to titles.
I think titles are always more interesting if they do not connect to what the characters are doing, but to the inner conflicts, themes, and messages of the book, origins, or a struggle. Idk, I like abstract titles that make you think. So I’d focus on what the emotions…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Q&A Forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Okay, when I first read that paragraph about Malyk dying, I thought you mean EVERTON was going to die, and I was really sad because I love what I’ve read about him…. (totally not stalking him or anything, lol)
But you didn’t, so we’re good. 😅😁
Aaaanyway, yes, I totally get it. I struggled with killing off any of my charries for a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Q&A Forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Idk who to tag so… here we go!
I have a question concerning my trilogy. This is also concerning plot twists/character deaths, so read at your own risk!!
*ahem*
Alrighty. Now for the actually problem.
In my whole trilogy, only one important character dies…
I feel like I need more characters to die.
😅
Now I know that sounds like I may be try…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Q&A Forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Awesome! Well I guess he already has something a little different about him, then, so that worked out! 😁
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Eclipse
Azar was itching to follow after Ridley. Eclipse could feel it. At least that would get us away from everyone else, he thought.
Azar let out a nearly imperceptible sigh, glancing around. But then we’d miss all the fun here, he replied. Honestly, there are too many decisions.
Maybe it’d be easier if you…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic so I'm publishing a novelette… in the forum Publishing & Platform 3 years, 4 months ago
*gasp*
You’re publishing a novella???
CONGRATULATIONS!!! 🥳
I definitely have to check it out!! 😄
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Esther replied to the topic Hi everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 4 months ago
I have arrived! *swooshes cape*
Welcome to Kingdom Pen @hybridlore!!
I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, fiction-writing, God-loving, teen girl!!
(Whew, that was a lot. 😮💨😂)
So cool that you play the violin too!! I suppose that brings me to the questions!
1. How long have you played violin?
2. W…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My Series REVEALED! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 LOL LOVE IT!!
@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6
Lesli stands back in shock, looking down at Acheron, then at Luna.
“Luna?” Lesli echoes Tauren.
Tauren slowly picks up Acheron’s sword.
Not much heavier than my pickaxe.
He steps back, still watching him warily.
“THAT WAS EPIC!” Lesli exclaims. She raises Luna’s hand in…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hi everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 4 months ago
Hi!! *waves, then hugs back*
You’re welcome! 😄 It was awesome!! You’re a really good writer and I’m super excited to read whatever you write next!
😅 And 180+ pages is amazing!! Congratulations!! 🎉
Thanks!! 😆
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
XD Haha, yeah, there’s a lot going on right now. Okay! Sounds good! 😀
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
😳😳😳😳
OH MY GOSH GIRL THAT WAS AWESOME XDXDXD
And I TOTALLY agree. That is the best thing I’ve imagined all week XDXD
Great job writing that!! I love Luna so much
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Q&A Forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@freedom
Arrgh, I know! I had to do this same thing a while back, and grr it’s so frustrating because sometimes it just has to be done… I mean, tropes became tropes because everyone thought they were a good idea, sooo…. There must be something there, right? XD
Anyway, I’ve got a few random thoughts (this might not be helpful because I have…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
sure! Luna can join!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
I’m allergic to peanut butter, therefore you can’t hit me in the head with that peanut butter sandwich.
*Smacks you with sun-butter sandwich*
I win.
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
@solfyre
Me too!! 😅 I don’t usually plan chapters out either! I just start with a idea 😂 Maybe that’s why I struggle so much after that
Yeah!! Definitely 😁
Oh lol! Yeah, they are pretty good, until the most recent ones at least. But I just remembered them because each book ends with a cliffhanger.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
XD XD I’m such a pantser I don’t even know when I’ll have cliffhangers or not. I mean, I planned out chapters 1 and 2, and then just went of the rails and the chapters have been ending that way, lol. Hey, but at least it keeps you reading 🤣
I read a random one of the Keeper of the Lost Cities books a loooong time ago because I got it…[Read more]
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