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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Augghhhhh.
Wow, this book felt way shorter than the second one. Is that the case, or was it just me?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Out of curiosity, how far are we through the book by now?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Please tell me you’re not really going to kill him off.
Also, if Albee is the one to tell him, then we don’t get to see what happens. 🙁
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hybridlore replied to the topic Contemporary writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Really know your characters and try to build conflict between them naturally. (There’s probably lots of articles about that, maybe some even on here.) The better you know and understand your characters, the easier writing will feel, especially if you don’t have a super clear plot and are more just following the events of a certain time…[Read more]
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hybridlore posted an update 1 year, 1 month ago
Hey, I’m a chosen one now! When did that happen?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
*sputters* Then how is Ian ever going to become a Christian? Leon won’t be there to explain it to him, and he probably hasn’t even listened the whole time!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Could you survive in your story's universe? If not, why? If so, how? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 1 month ago
Ooh, great question, @whalekeeper!
My main WIP right now . . . yes, since it’s essentially our world, just in the near future. Although, it will get a little harder as time progresses and the government begins to persecute Christians.
As for my other project, Eidar . . . As long as I had the right equipment. Like Loopy’s world, there are a LOT…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
ELLETTE. You can not leave me like that. Leon can’t die now!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Great section! I too loved the part where they told the children about Jesus. I’m excited to see if/how Leon reaches Ian.
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Esther replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Ohhh, haha, gotcha 🤪
yeah I actually had no idea this was where Wyoh originated!!
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 1 month ago
Praying! <33
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 1 year, 1 month ago
https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ
@keilah-h @whalekeeper @esther-c @grcr @theducktator @theshadow @anyone-else
I JUST WROTE A NEW CHAPTERRR-
oh wow!
so in order to exert his power he needs to steal from her. Interesting.
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yeah, he gets power off of the lies she believes. but she doesn’t know that yet.
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ohhhh! ok that makes sense.
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I feel terrible for her. That life seems excruciating.
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yeah…it is *cries*
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Wait whattt
Iverrrr 🧐-
PLOT TWIST BWAHAHAA
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What’s the twist? I didn’t see a twist, but that might’ve just been me.
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Because TIGIN showed up…the same Pythonos that tried to kill Liv in the desert, and the same Pythonos that held Ottoline captive…he survived the tidal wave and he knows Iver!
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Oh I’d forgotten his name.
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ohhhh okay! so it’s all coming together.
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YESSSSS
bwahahahahha
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Oh my goodness, poor Sef. *is slightly traumatized* Lilitu, save her!
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I KNOWWWWW
XXD
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 1 month ago
@the_lost-journal
Praying!! 🙏 -
hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Awesome, thank you!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @linus-smallprint @theshadow
New chapter is out!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
No you weren’t in this RP, but I thought you might want to know the whole story behind Wyoh lolll
Because I think we all forgot it, and we were the ones who came up with it lol
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Esther replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
*tiptoes in quiety*
I hath been tagged…
but idk if I was actually ever in this RP 😂
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Excuse me while I go DIE OF CUTENESS. I was literally hopping around squealing, and then ranted about it for five minutes to one of my sisters. Your couples are ADORABLE. I LOVE THEM.
Ahhhh, I’m so glad you love themmm!!! 🥰🥰
(it’s actually kinda funny, my Mom and I recently had a conversation about why me and my siblings are…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Contemporary writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
*bursts in through the door and tumbles onto the ground* *hops up and dusts self off* Did I hear someone mention ConTEmPoRarY fiCtIOn??? 👀 I’m here for it 😎
First of all, make sure you’re reading contemporary!!! Especially within the little genres that you want to focus on. I can’t stress how helpful this is. I know some authors are l…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
I knoww. It does seem to work with his backstory, though. Poor guy. Ten years in slavery…
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Congratulations!
Why thank you. *curtsies*