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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Yeah, I gotcha. But it did catch me off guard.
I feel like he won’t … but I could be wrong. And if he betrayed them, he probably wouldn’t come back.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Ohhh, they look so good!!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
The new section looks good too! It did confuse me when, in the letter, they mentioned that Jews were not better than Greeks. This seems kind of out of place in your fantasy world. Maybe cut that sentence, or you could put, Ardentans are not greater than those of the Empire? Or something like  that.
Anyway, good job! I’m ro…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
The new section looks good. Sorry, I was at co-op and then had a lot of notifs when I got back so it was a little overwhelming.
Whatever happened to the prince. . . *shudders* Creepy. Hopefully Leon and Julian will get to talk to him soon.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 5 months ago
That’s terrible. Praying!! 🙏
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@esther-c @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @rae @hybridlore @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-lol
and an extra aesthetic 👀
aka the villain’s aesthetic
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle hehe, thank you🤭
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
and finally, MC #5:
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
MC #4:
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
MC #3
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
MC #2:
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@esther-c @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @rae @hybridlore @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-lol
MC Aesthetics for my fantasy WIP 🤭
MC #1:
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Also, I am dying for a protective older brother moment somewhere. 😂
I’ll see if I can put that in there somewhere… I’m sure there’ll be an opportunity. 😉😊
Liam totally counts, I just forgot him. 😢
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Great!
Also… don’t hurt Everett please!!
Lol. Three of them want me to make him suffer 🤨 My plan hasn’t changed, though. There are challenges ahead, but more for Sara and Cole. And Alec.
*smiles and nods* yes, put those characters through the fire, and we’ll see on the other side who were the true ones, and who wer…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
Oops I totally missed this lol!
I get a lot of references from Pinterest, but I’ve heard theres a growing amount of ai art on it so ughhhh. There’s still good stuff on there. I usually use references from shows I like. I recently watched a Donghua called Link Click (wait I haven’t ranted to you about this yet lol, it’s such a great…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I count six that Ellette has killed…
but pretty much everyone in her books has almost died at least once.ÂI want to see him put to the test, and I want to see him face consequences for that choice, even though he chose the right thing, and I want to watch him struggle through and stand firm in that!
I just want yo…
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hybridlore replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 5 months ago
I don’t think so… Like I said, I’d have to look at it.
Yeah, maybe try.
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MineralizedWritings posted an update 1 year, 5 months ago
Hi! (I can’t get into my email so I’m messaging you here lol)
I’m watching a historical fiction anime called The Vinland Saga rn, have you seen it? Idk I thought you might like it, it’s a sienen (made for adults) so it can be heavy on the gore but it’s a war show so to be expected. I’m only 8 episodes in so I can’t say for the…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Yay, the bonus section!! XD
The part where Julian says he has to stay in his room and then two sentences later says he might go downstairs was a little confusing.
I thought he was going to be sick for longer than that—I don’t know, just seemed like something you would do.
Nice to see Joseph and his family mentioned again. I m…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle @theducktator @keilah-h
What did I just come back to? Why do you all want me to beat up Everett? 🥺
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Wow!! Thanks so much for mentioning that! I’ll look it up right away and see what my folks think. (I like to get their advice before I watch something new. 😉)
Again, thanks so much!
also, did you draw your pfp? If so, it’s pretty amazing!
Ok! Tell me if you watch it! Only thing to note is that in general Japanese shows can be really sad and you have to stick it out for the payoff. There’s a lot of bad guys and their behavior is gross, however the show does a good job portraying it as gross. The main character has a pretty negative revenge arc but it’s obviously not being portrayed…[Read more]
I didn’t draw it lol, Idk I usually would use my art but I just felt kinda lazy and wanted my fav character as the pfp XD I’m pretty sure it’s a panel from the manga.
I actually am a secret lover of sad stories and tragedies, as long as there’s a beautiful purpose for them. Ooo! Have you seen Grave of Fireflies? That one was so, so sweet and so beautiful. (and tragic) I loved it so much. It was my first anime, and it was WWII so I was all in!
Ooo! Dresses! Nice! Yes of course I’ll let you know when/if I watch…[Read more]
Oh nice! I love sad stories too XD if a show makes me cry I know it’s a good one! I haven’t, but I’ve heard great things about it and it’s on my tbw! Totally understandable! I haven’t seen that one.
well nice pfp anyhow. It reminded me of your work. ☺️
Aw thanks! < 3