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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
That’s good that they’ll be more distinguishable— but I hope that doesn’t mean they’ll drift apart.
Yeah xD It would be interesting. It was a sweet scene though.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I liked the transition right at the scene break before Liesl and Roland got married. And how you showed Leon’s state of mind after the fever and how Julian didn’t understand it.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
No, I was just on my phone already and I saw the notification pop up.
Not really… no suggestions really stood out. 🤷♀️
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Aww. Good section. I’m so glad Leon didn’t die.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Guys…I haven’t signed up for CEW yet….. 🫣
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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
@theducktator love the aesthetic board!!
It’s so depressing. 😭 I’m concerned…
As you should be🤠
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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon I’m glad you like it. And it means so much that other historical fictions make you think of my characters😭🫶
Note: I haven’t killed them in my head cannons yet. I leave that to the resident author who shall remain nameless, Ellette.
Nah, I haven’t killed any of them in my mind because I don’t think…
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Yeah, but if there’s a lot of plants, chances are there’s a lot of animals surviving off of that, which means the wolves shouldn’t be having much trouble finding food.
You could just take out this sentence:
The wolves growled, but they were hungry, and they decided the threat was worth the potential kill. The winter had been…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Ok sounds good!
I would, but I’m focusing on writing and not editing for these next few months.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
That sounds like fun! I’m not exactly sure how busy I’ll be this summer, but I’d love to join in. The next few weeks are going to be kind of crazy though.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Oh no!!! Not Leon!!
Good section. One thing I noticed was that you mentioned that the people were able to find a lot of food during the winter… then you said that it had been hard on everyone, especially the wolves. I get that they eat meat and not plants, but it was kind of confusing.
otherwise, good job! 😬
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freedom replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
Though I do know soldiers had to be clean shaven at that time…….. 🤭
Shhhh let me have my creative liberty😂🫶
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Esther replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Didn’t get much done, lol. Got distracted by looking at movie times with my brother XD
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Esther replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Ope, almost forgot, going toooo…. :50
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Esther replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Sprinting to hopefully do something writing related… I haven’t really written since the end of March 🫣🫣
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I know, I’m sorry. 😞 It would have been cool to maybe meet you in person.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Yes, we were able to get a rental in the other state, not Indiana.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Ahh. Yeah, I get what you mean.
I think so. Not totally sure yet, but my mom’s talked to the tutors there, and we’re thinking that we will. I don’t know if Challenge 4 will be as fun as Challenge 3, though. @whalekeeper, what did you think of Ch4?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
😝
Remind me again what the prompt was? I can barely remember.
@whalekeeper @ducktator
Nice. Yeah, saying goodbye was sad, but I’m kinda glad it’s over.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
When does y’all’s CCs end? Ours ended yesterday.
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