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@whalekeeper

Yay!!

@keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle

It’s Tuesday! I have two new chapters for you guys. (Then I probably should go down to one a week.)

@ellette-giselle

You’re really just going to leave me hanging like that?? 😳

@jonas

It sounds like a super fun idea! I don’t know if I’ll participate this time, though, since I’m kind of in the middle of my WIP and already have some people critiquing it. Thanks for the invite! Oh, and like Ellette said, if you happen to need some outsiders to force help people get writing, I could probably do that! 😁

@esther-c

Hiiii Esther! I just saw this!!!
I have a critique for Easton’s character arc.

You’ve been having him do all these things for Tyler, and having him trying to encourage Tyler.

Do you mean to have him come off as kind of distant and cold? like Shadow said, he feels really impersonal.

What I mean is, in your book are you trying to show…[Read more]

@loopylin

One time back when I was a kid and lived further west a giant slug slimed on me and we couldn’t get it off, even had to use that like industrial soap that has sand beads in it. I was crying so hard 😭

@whalekeeper

oof lol, I’ll pray for you! I’ve had scopes before but under anesthesia, I can’t imagine doing it awake!

@theducktator Yay!!

@whalekeeper

Totally understand where you’re coming from. I’ll be praying!

@the_lost-journal

Congratulations!!!

@keilah-h

Ewwww! Babies too? 🤮

@ellette-giselle

Nope. XD

@ellette-giselle

Yes, I did—I think I responded? Unless I didn’t send it?

It’s cool. I had no idea what it meant until I read the rest of it though. XD

@ellette-giselle

That’s so exciting!!!! Congratulations!!!!

@ellette-giselle

Yay!! I was getting a little worried 😅

Have you graduated yet, by the way? (Congrats if you did!)

This section was good. I think you did a good job of showing the horror of the University executions without making it too descriptive *shudders*

Leon ran the other way, and Julian turned and scrambled down the street nearest to…

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@ellette-giselle

No new sections?

@whalekeeper

I definitely understand from my perspective as a loved one of the sick person.

I’m glad you’re able to recognize it’s different, bc it really is but it’s still so much more understanding than most people have.

There is nothing more frustrating than thinking there is improvement, and backtracking for what seems like a ridiculous or…

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@whalekeeper

My mum has complained about how doctors used to constantly tell her she was crazy and imagining things, which also led to self-image issues because they discriminated against her weight gain. I’m sorry you’re going through similar problems. Please update when you want, I want to listen too. <3<3

It’s really good to know som…[Read more]

@rae

Yeah ikr! It’s honestly so insane. And American healthcare isn’t the best at sorting that kind of stuff out in my experience.

Thank you so much < 3

@koshka OOH I LOVE IT

I don’t have anything to edit atm and am deep in the trenches of drafting😂 so probably not joining

however, I shall cheer y’all on from the sidelines🤭🥳