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@jonas

I’ll try to check it out! It sounds cool, but I don’t know if I’m ready to sign up for reading another project right now. I’m sure there are some people on here who would, though!

Throwing out some tags…

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @theshadow @thearcaneaxiom

@ellette-giselle

I still feel like Jonathan’s brother might not be dead, but I know you tried to quench that.

Jonathan was pretty smart, and the Agents wanted him before, so they might try to get him to work for them. Or something. Maybe use Michael as leverage. Or they want them to help them defeat the rebels by taking information… 🫣

@ellette-giselle

They should be on there, but it might take a minute. Sometimes I have to reload mine for it to work.

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @whalekeeper @theshadow

New chapters!

What are you doing to them?!

No, this is actually really interesting… I wonder what the Agents want with them. Probably nothing good.

@ellette-giselle

Michael seems sweet, lol. I liked him.

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Oh, no…

@ellette-giselle

He’s slowly softening to the rebels, and becoming curious about their strength and hope. Also, he apologized.

@ellette-giselle

Hey, I was right.

Good chapters. Jonathan’s arc is starting to turn around, yay! 😁 I liked the way you did that, and the ending of the last chapter.

@ellette-giselle

All good things, hopefully?

I liked these two chapters. Amber handled Jonathan very well, and I’m excited to see him have the conversation with Michael. I also want to know how their mission goes.

Why do I feel like this is the part where you might kill someone off?

@theshadow

Hey! I’m doing pretty good, how are you?

No worries, I know the end of the school year is chaotic. 😂 I’ll add you to the new doc!

Thanks! Glad you like him. 😅 He’s one of my favorites too.

@rae

Gotcha.

@ellette-giselle

I like Evan, he’s probably my favorite. The other guys sort of blend together a little for me (that might just be a me thing though.) Amber is fun too.

@ellette-giselle

Exactly.

@ellette-giselle

Yikes. Poor Jonathan.

@rae

Thanks for the update!! I’ll keep praying!

How have you been feeling?

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters!

Amber and James both have tough backstories…

Be careful out there, fellow writers 👀😂

@ellette-giselle

Evan’s story is crazy. He must sympathize with Jonathan a lot.

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters! The rebellion is reminding me of the church meetings in my story.

Jonathan’s adjustment is pretty realistic. He’s struggling, but wants to please the people who are teaching him despite himself.

I don’t really know why they can’t just let him go–that was a bit blurry for me. I know he was captured and taken…[Read more]

@rae

Aww, they sound adorable! Sir Fluffyface is such a cute name 🤣

Name them after characters. That’s always a solid choice. 😉