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@ellette-giselle

Love it! 🥰

@savannah_grace2009

I’m not 100% sure either 🤣

Ok that makes sense! 😉 Yeah, I could always take a snippet of it and write it how I would interpret a four year old thinking through that if you wanted an example. (i don’t know if that’s weird or not 😂)

@peoplessss

Sharing the three moodboards from my current WIP! (First is the book moodboard, then Clayton, then Audrey)

@esther-c

I don’t know how a four year old thinks hahaha

honestly I had really deep thoughts for a little kid and I have always thought really complex, so it seems realistic to me XDXD

I will work on it!!!

@ellette-giselle

Ok….Werner looks like he’d be a favorite character of mine… 🤭 Lmk if you post any snippets of him!!

@savannah_grace2009

Oooh, I like it!! My only critique is the first half of the chapter…. It was great until I found out Sef was only 4 at this point. It just felt a little too complex to be coming from a 4 year old, ya know? Maybe simplify it somehow? Keep the same emotions that Sef is feeling, but see if you can bring it down to a 4 year o…[Read more]

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@freed_and_redeemed

Ooohhhh, interesting….👀

@the_lost-journal

This looks interesting! I can’t promise I’ll be able to keep up, but I might just stalk the topic. We’ll see!

@anyone-who-is-interested

Chapter 1

Strong hands grabbed at her shoulders, trying to rip her away.

But Sef wouldn’t let go.

Eyes scrunched shut, tears leaking from the corners, she clung to her father like he was the only thing keeping her life together.

In a way, he was.

And now he was leaving.

“Let go, Sef,” her mother said stern…

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@koshka it is helpful, actually.

I need help with Slavic culture😅 I know next to nothing, and Google is not helpful💀

but I’m glad you’re excited!! I am too and honestly can’t wait for everyone to read book 3 even tho book 2 isn’t even out yet😫

@ellette-giselle

AHH Werner looks amazing😍😍😍

also, it’s been in hardcover the whole time??? I think??? 😅 Amazon set it up to be all 3, so🤷🏻‍♀️ the cover is the same and everything, it’s just hardcover and more expensive

and if life allows, I’d love to beta read your book, Ellette! and yes, I can help look out for German culture for sure😉 I’m…[Read more]

totally not talking about a lovely side character that y’all are gonna love in my WW1 WIP and the one whose death begins Hans’ hatred against Jews

totally not🤠

that moment when you start writing a side character more, realize you love them so much, and then realize they have to d!e for the plot

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@the_lost-journal This sounds like a super cool idea! Unfortunately, I don’t think I’ll participate this time—I’m already not really keeping up with the fantasy RP—but I may check in on it to watch what happens.

@grcr Praying as well!! *virtual hug* 🤗

@theducktator

I agree with what hybrid and highscribe said. Definitely consider the length and genre of your book first. If your novel is only going to be 60-70k, I would definitely hesitate adding more POV characters cuz then they each only get 10-15k each and that’s really not a lot in the big scheme of things.

Also consider if each c…[Read more]

@grcr

Oh no, my prayers will definitely be with you and your family. 🙏🏻 Sending virtual hugs your way! 🫂💕

“fear not, for I am with you; be not dismayed, for I am your God; I will strengthen you, I will help you, I will uphold you with my righteous right hand.”
‭‭Isaiah‬ ‭41‬:‭10‬ ‭

“I sought the Lord, and he answered me and delivered me from…[Read more]