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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Great section!! 🥰 I liked the Wilhelm-actually-Prince-Deitrich twist. Pretty cool that he’s now a Christian… but it’s going to be very dangerous.
By the way, congrats on the publishing house! The website looks great!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
No problem, it just confused me and I wondered if I was misunderstanding.
Okay, that makes more sense. Lol! That’s really weird.
Yeah, I’m trying not to spoil anything, but it seems like it will still work… possibly. I’m not sure if the glitch on the page (with the mysterious text box) is the best way to go, but it will do…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
totally would be interested, ty for the tag! Let me know if you make it happen!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
“If you look at the code before, you will see the two dashes and the arrow indicating the end of a comment. . .”
I’m looking for this, but I can’t find it in the HTML box before the comment you left. I did, however, see this: class=”mt-2″ placeholder=””> –> directly below the comment. Is that what you were referring to?
So if…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Yeah, I gotcha. But it did catch me off guard.
I feel like he won’t … but I could be wrong. And if he betrayed them, he probably wouldn’t come back.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Ohhh, they look so good!!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
The new section looks good too! It did confuse me when, in the letter, they mentioned that Jews were not better than Greeks. This seems kind of out of place in your fantasy world. Maybe cut that sentence, or you could put, Ardentans are not greater than those of the Empire? Or something like  that.
Anyway, good job! I’m ro…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
The new section looks good. Sorry, I was at co-op and then had a lot of notifs when I got back so it was a little overwhelming.
Whatever happened to the prince. . . *shudders* Creepy. Hopefully Leon and Julian will get to talk to him soon.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 5 months ago
That’s terrible. Praying!! 🙏
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@esther-c @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @rae @hybridlore @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-lol
and an extra aesthetic 👀
aka the villain’s aesthetic

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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle hehe, thank you🤭
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
and finally, MC #5:

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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
MC #4:

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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
MC #3

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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
MC #2:

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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@esther-c @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @rae @hybridlore @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-lol
MC Aesthetics for my fantasy WIP 🤭
MC #1:

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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Also, I am dying for a protective older brother moment somewhere. 😂
I’ll see if I can put that in there somewhere… I’m sure there’ll be an opportunity. 😉😊
Liam totally counts, I just forgot him. 😢
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Great!
Also… don’t hurt Everett please!!
Lol. Three of them want me to make him suffer 🤨 My plan hasn’t changed, though. There are challenges ahead, but more for Sara and Cole. And Alec.
*smiles and nods* yes, put those characters through the fire, and we’ll see on the other side who were the true ones, and who wer…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
Oops I totally missed this lol!
I get a lot of references from Pinterest, but I’ve heard theres a growing amount of ai art on it so ughhhh. There’s still good stuff on there. I usually use references from shows I like. I recently watched a Donghua called Link Click (wait I haven’t ranted to you about this yet lol, it’s such a great…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I count six that Ellette has killed…
but pretty much everyone in her books has almost died at least once.ÂI want to see him put to the test, and I want to see him face consequences for that choice, even though he chose the right thing, and I want to watch him struggle through and stand firm in that!
I just want yo…
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