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hybridlore replied to the topic Critiques for a short story I wrote? in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, I knew it was pretty obvious. I’m not sure how else to write it (where it’s not obvious) in such a short word count.
So, yeah. As soon as I posted it I was like, oh, I need to add something that talks about how the rules/guards have been changed. Really when I wrote it I was thinking it’d have a few more scenes, but then when I got…[Read more] -
hybridlore posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
It’s almost 2024 … 😳
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Ugh, I know, that’s the worst. Maybe try Nameberry? I usually go there for names.
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hybridlore started the topic Critiques for a short story I wrote? in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 9 months ago
@esther-c @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @whalekeeper @rae @kyronthearcanin @trailblazer @anyone-interested
Hi! I wrote this short story… I think last week, and I would love any critiques or advice you guys have. I’m not really sure if the ending is timed right… but anyway, I’m excited to see what you think! The…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
I like it! Blair and Blaine are really similar names, though. That might get confusing, unless it’s intentional?
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hybridlore replied to the topic An aggravation over Stained Glass in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 9 months ago
@koshka This is really beautiful!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I think Sef and Chase are basically done talking (so are Liv and Lukas)…so sure!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, Rylee loves her dog named Bear, and just animals and general XD
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Esther replied to the topic Christmas!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Oh this is so fun! Yeah, it’s after Christmas, but I’m answering anyway. XD
how do you celebrate Christmas Eve/Christmas?
Typically our church has a Christmas Eve service, so we’ll go to that. For Christmas Eve dinner, we’ll eat finger foods and we make a punch with Hawaiian Punch, 7-UP, and orange sherbet. Then there’s this cute…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 9 months ago
I know this is late, but I’ll be praying for him too. That’s tough. ❤️
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@everyone
What do y’all think about switching parnters for the next dance? Of course you can finish up your conversations and such though. 😉
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Lukas
He shrugged. “Well when I heard about the dance I didn’t really want to go, but when…” he trailed, catching himself before saying something embarrassing. “Yeah, I think I’d still want to go as long as you do.”
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
I love both of those!! I can tell so much about these charries just from their boards.
And I’m assuming Rylee loves dogs or something like that…? She sounds pretty cool. 😏
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @beth-torres @anyoneelseinthatchat….
Throwback to the time you guys had a conversation without me and I spammed the chat!
Go to this link and scroll to the bottom…. https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-party/page/240/you’re welcome!!! hehe
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Aww, that’s so sweet of Chase <3
Sef
Chase smiled, and it made her heart skip a beat.
No.
I am not falling for him.
I’m not.
But he smiled again, and she knew it was hopeless.
She was falling fast.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Ohhh, okay.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Aww, really?!?!?!
I love sad books because I love crying over books for some reason…XD
Yeah, it ends on a sad note but also happy….haha!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
Guyssss, I got my very own Stanley tumbler!!!! (I feel so cool XD)
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