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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
I knowww!
I kind of already knew He was technically our brother, but part of me wasn’t sure if He wanted us to consider Him as an older brother…idk, I wasn’t sure if it was respectful or not.
And then one day I found that verse in Hebrews and I was like
WHAAAAAA?!?!?
And everything made sense lol!
Like Jesus loves us so…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
if you don’t mind me asking, what’s it like being the oldest? Like I see everywhere that being the oldest sister is like a ton of work and by the end you have mental health issues and then struggle for the rest of your life but I mean you published a book so clearly you’re proving them wrong
in fact most of the people I know who have…
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@whalekeeper Lol! 😂
@koshka @whaley @godlyfantasy12 I should be on there also as hybridlore, but we shall see on Monday. 🤷♀️
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freedom replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
NOO shoot this is Whaley now, ignore the little sister
🤣🤣🤣
but MAYBE I wanna know about the chicken and Marcel’s girlfriend XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Oh yayyy a purple heart!!!
(purple’s my favorite color lol!)
Awww I’m always here for you <3
💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
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freedom posted an update 1 year, 8 months ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @grcr @rae @esther-c @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @liberty @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @anyone-else-idk-lol
Hiii y’all. I’ve been pretty absent from KP if you haven’t noticed😅XD
In between catching up on school, church, family, life, a bit of writing, drawing,…[Read more] -
freedom replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
i messed up your tag somehow🙄🤣
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freedom replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@godlyfantasy don’t worry, I think we all understand XD
and yes, it’s Crazy Writing Week. I haven’t participated before and prob won’t this year bc I have school I need to catch up on, and not writing a whole whole lot bc of that and the fact that I’ve been busy with a lot of ✨marketing✨ XD for book 2, which is hopefully releasing by the end o…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Hey, girl! It’s Crazy Writing Week, and you’re just in time! I believe it starts on the sixth. 😊
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
Awwww Chase <333
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Awww!
Oooohhh I love long books lol…whenever I read a super long book I feel so powerful lollll XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I understand taking a break, I had to do the same thing with my novel!
You take as long as you need, girly <3
I’d love the link if you’re okay with sharing it!!!!!!
Just know that even though sometimes it feels really overwhelming and like some days you can’t bring yourself to write a single word, you’re still a very talented and capable…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Oh, ok, lol! 😅
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Well. I just scrolled through like, ten pages of this to count my snowballs. I think there was eight. I will be writing them up and posting them later.
Sorry I haven’t responded to your KP fanfic sections. It’s about to get interesting, tag me when you finish the next one!
@theducktator Your signature isn’t from Of Fire and Ash, is it?…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Oh no!!! That’s terrible!!! That makes me want to cry for you!
I know. I was so mad.
Hmm, I find it funny that you think the ending thing feels a little un-realistic. I wrote it after reading of five different situations in different countries where something like this happened to Believers who had been arrested. XD
I guess the B…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
THEOLOGY/MESSAGE
~ Any theological concerns for the story?
I don’t think so.
~ What would you say my world view was?
Christian? XD. (Again, I don’t really know what kind of answer you want here.)
~ What would you say was the message of the story?
God will give us strength when we are weak and help us have the courage to stand up for Him.
~Were…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
STORYLINE
~ Was the plot solid and engaging?
~ Did the pacing feel consistent throughout the book? If not, where did it lag or feel dull?
I feel like these two kind of go together. The pacing, I felt, was not very consistent. Sometimes we would be skipping over weeks or months, sometimes we would get slow, slice-of-life scenes, and sometimes we…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I’m flexible, so whenever everyone else is ready to read the next book is fine with me. And is it about Leon and Julian?
K, here’s the characters section.
CHARACTERS~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
Joseph, because he’s the main. 🤪 But no, really, we got to see all his inner…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I WAS LITERALLY ON THE ILLUSTRATION QUESTION 😣
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I was so, so close to finishing your questions, and then a bee came over by me, and I picked up my laptop and ran away (lol.)
But then I accidentally hit the screen somehow and I CLOSED THE LINK!!!
Augggghhhh. I cannot believe that just happened. Now I have to write them all out AGAIN. So this might take a while.
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*SCREAMS*
The end of this month!!!!!
*goes and checks the Leon and Riker fund*
I’ve got the money all ready and waiting!!!
Wow I’m so excited!!! I can’t wait! Yippity yippity yippity!
I’m doing pretty good! We’ve got some crazy stuff going on, and my dad’s job is stressful at the moment because it always is after the people are done tearing…[Read more]
@ellette-giselle
Ah…those noisy charries…they just beg for attention! I am feeling the same way right now. I’m working on Buddy Brindle, but this newest story idea (the one inspired by sleep terrors) just keeps popping into my mind! My poor dogs! They’re getting neglected!
Did you know? Charles Dicken’s son said something very similar about…[Read more]
This month? EEEEEEEE! That’s awesome!!
2025 is going great so far! Finished my latest fanfic New Year’s and I’m currently having my brother beta read it.
my characters? They’re doing pretty well. I have a new idea that’s fairly original and I kinda want to write it.
I’ve also been learning animation. Which is good for me, but not for some of my…[Read more]
I’m so excited for you!!! I can’t wait to read itttt!!!
2025 writing-wise is off to a slow start, but a start nonetheless! I didn’t write as much as I wanted to during December because I was lacking in motivation (ok, I was just being lazy, lolll), but I’ve forced myself to start writing again and I’m hoping CWW will give me a shove in the right…[Read more]
END OF THIS MONTH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Does a happy dance* YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hope it all goes well!
Glad you’re doing okay
@freed_and_redeemed
Ahh!!! I haven’t even bought your first book yet! (I have to collect some money). By the way, how did you find those amazing character pictures that are on your banner????
Well………I’ve been accepted to write a serial story for the Ardent Youth!!!!!! (That’s the Amish magazine I write for). I’m SO excited to do this since…[Read more]
@liberty
Oh my goodness I know! Hey, have you watched, “The Man Who Invented Christmas?” It’s the story of Charles Dickens and is so, so cool!
@ellette-giselle
No, I haven’t seen that film.