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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
Ahaha! Maybe that’s the real trick of relationships in a story… Not exactly being all sappy, but making people smile. (lol perfectly worded I’m so trademarking that XDXD)
AHA!! *jots this down in a notepad* That’s a pro tip!! Now I finally know how to write relationships . . . lolol
But seriously, if I ever decide to add romanc…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Q&A Forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@hybridlore (thanks!) @livingwoodchronicles
I will get to this in a minute, sry I’m on the ride home. I’ll do my best to help lol
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hybridlore replied to the topic Q&A Forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
I would love to help!!
I mean . . . I like sci fi 🤣 But I’m not an expert or anything. Still I could try to help you with whatever you need help with!
(Nice to meet you too, by the way!)That reminds me, @kyronthearcanin has a reallyyy good sci fi WIP. So maybe she would have advice?
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
GASP I love that so much!!! I like dystopian stories in general but that’s just awesome. I love the names too!
Yep, I’ve posted my WIP Healer. (I will keep my rant as short as possible XD) So, there are five races- the Lupinari (based off wolves), Arcanin (based off bears; they have magic, symbolized by the stars on their…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Q&A Forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Just saw your response!! Lol is it just me whose screen doesn’t update until you’ve already replied?
Nice to meet you! I’m new, lol.
I really like that idea about Thorn . . . I’m talking like I’m her author XD. But yeah, @whalekeeper, I think that would be really cool! And now I want to read your book too, lol
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Kylie replied to the topic Q&A Forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Heyyyyyy!!!!! I’m back!!! How’s it going, girlfriend!???
And I need a bit of help. Does anyone here know how to write really good sci-fi?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Q&A Forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
So . . . I don’t really know much about your story . . . but I can give you my thoughts about character arcs!
I’m a complete beginner at writing this kind of thing, but I do read a lot. So maybe that counts for something? xD
Dogchild and Marcel both do sound very similar, but the way that they react is different. So in my opinion,…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
Random thing, while I’m thinking about it…
For Healer, (and for the series I’m hoping to make out of it) I’m doing a POV from first-person present. It’s been different, because I usually write in past tense. I was trying to think of a way to add that style into this fantasy world.
So… My idea was, a story collection from this…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@kyronethearcanin
Somehow I managed not to see this until now… I’ve done that twice in the past two days! 🤦♀️
XD
Doing well!
Glad to hear it!
What’s you WIP about? I feel like maybe I’ve heard of it (you might even have told me lol I have a terrible memory lol) but I’m drawing a blank…
Oh great question! I have multiple projects, but my main is…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
Ahaha! Maybe that’s the real trick of relationships in a story… Not exactly being all sappy, but making people smile. (lol perfectly worded I’m so trademarking that XDXD)
Yes! We are Hybridlore and Solfyre, the weird pantser duo! 🤣🤣 I might’ve mentioned this before but I love your username. Lol part of the reason I used Solfyre as…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
Oh my goodness — I read that paragraph and by the end, I wAs SMilInG ToO!!!
We can be weird together 🤣🤣
She sounds perfect for him XD and I really want to see that drawing 🤣
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
Ooooh I should draw them together XDXD
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
XDXD
Right!? lol
Lol my brainstorming process is all over the place rn. She would be another soldier helping them in their mission to free the prisoners. I always call her Naria in my head, because I randomly thought of that name and wasn’t sure where to use it (I know it sounds like Narnia but whatever XD). I picture her with dark…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
oh yeah!! I’m probably doing it right now 🤣
because we can’t have everyone become halflings XD
Awww . . . why not?? Jk XD
Seriously though, that would be the best !! I can picture it already . . . he’s so awkward 🤣🤣
So would she be like someone who helps them? Ahh I srsly need to know what happens now — all my br…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Thanks!!! 😉 I actually don’t know what character I would put in . . . XD
I’ll maybe join later tonight? Haha I’m actually supposed to be doing homework right now. . . so . . . yeah 🤣
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Oops, I was looking at the page before this where @smiley asked to join. Lol
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Oh could I also join? Haha, I know you guys have a lot of people on this right now so I could wait if needed 🙂
I could definitely use some practice in character development 🤣
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
Yes, definitely! XD
Same! My brother always rolls his eyes at me. Whenever I’m writing a scene I like I just end up grinning for what seems like no reason lol.
Also… I’ve thought about having a love interest for Sorren. What do you think about that? It would be another Lupinari, because we can’t have everyone become halflings XD
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
My sister’s always like, ‘why are you smiling?’Â XDXD
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
We should start a survey forum, lolol
Yesssss I can’t wait !!! *probably looks like I’m randomly smiling at my computer*
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