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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 11 months ago
Thanks for the tag!! You’re really saving me there XD I hope to be more active, especially once I leave YWW. (:
Hey! So yeah, I love and write sci-fi, and I love this story!! You’re a very talented writer. I agree with everything hybridlore said – on the topic of long/short paragraphs, I think it’s a thing where people have…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 2 years, 11 months ago
Girl I feel so bad about that now, I just tried to give advice on a character when you didn’t ask for it 🤦🏻♀️it just really sounded like Ottoline’s situation 😭
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Yep, @jonas got it! XD
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 2 years, 11 months ago
Oops! Sorry about the assumption, I hope it was helpful in some way! 🙂
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Brianne replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
@hybridlore @acancello @smiley @thearcaneaxiom @kyronthearcanin @esther-c @rae
Hi y’all, I have a couple of questions, and as it seems that you have all been here for longer than I, I’m hoping that you can answer them.
#1: What are ranks? I’ve seen different ones under everybody’s profile, and I was just wondering what they are.
#2: Where would…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 2 years, 11 months ago
Great advice!
Ottoline from “Character Party” isn’t the one I was asking the question for, though, it’s an entirely different character. (If you check out my WIP page on KP, you’ll see it.)
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Nope, I think it’s just you XD I didn’t notice anything seeming weird, except I didn’t understand when Albert said, “We’ll see who gets the red ear of corn tonight!” until Dr. Hawley opened it. Anyway, I like Clara and him together so far!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 2 years, 11 months ago
Oh also (I’m sorry, if you can’t tell I have a lot of info on the topic to share) if you look up what ptsd is like you’ll know more about those flashback reactions. I have no idea how real they are but I see them all the times in books, and books generally aren’t a good source of reference.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 2 years, 11 months ago
Oh and I saw you said you needed help with how they would act after trauma and abuse, so I’ll add on a little more.
Everyone I think will have a slightly different reaction, but seeing as it’s a relative, it depends on what their relationship was like before this started. Did it start when she was young? If so, she likely…[Read more]
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Brianne replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
My favorite character to write is probably one of the main characters in my current WIP, whose name is Obsidian Gray. He’s pretty easy to write, but hasn’t been a point-of-view character yet, so I don’t know for sure.
What’s your current WIP about? If you’re posting things about it on here, would you tag me?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 11 months ago
Okay, I was just making sure! Hmm…. yeah, I would just tag anyone you know/people who asked about your WIP, but of course you don’t have to. It just helps them to see it.
I know that @loopylin and @kyronthearcanin write science fiction, so maybe they would be interested to read it? Sorry, I don’t know who you’ve met yet. Or maybe @whalekee…[Read more]
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Brianne replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Hello!
I try to write every day, but that rarely happens… so I’d say five or six times a week, but at the beginning of June I stopped writing and didn’t start again until like a week ago.
I currently have one WIP that I’m sticking with, but every night in bed I think up more (they’re just not good enough to write anything about).
I like…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Questionnaire in the forum Characters 2 years, 11 months ago
Thanks! Of course!
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Sorry I never replied to this, but I still read it! I like where it’s going, lol. It’ll be interesting to see if Clara finds a husband XD
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Questionnaire in the forum Characters 2 years, 11 months ago
I use it to mean negative traits, but you’re right, it’s a little confusing. I’ll change that.
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hybridlore started the topic Character Questionnaire in the forum Characters 2 years, 11 months ago
Hey guys! I know we’ve already had some of these topics, but I made another one! I don’t like to go into TOO much detail about my characters, but I’ve found that answering a few important questions can go a long way in fleshing them out.
I just made this questionnaire the other day, and it’s helped me a lot so far! If any of you wants to use it,…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 2 years, 11 months ago
This is a great question!
I totally understand the thing with your parents. I don’t show my work to my parents or many people either, just because I don’t know what people would think of it. Teenagers in general like dystopian/ darker genre’s I think, so it might be harder for them to understand why you write it. The world…[Read more]
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