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@loopylin

Ooooh! I really like it!!

@mineralizedwritings

well… you can barely see it… darn.

@mineralizedwritings

Thank you so much!!

Lol go ahead and use it for a bit if you like! I’m not terribly attached because it was just a sketchy thing XD

Of course!

Ooooh, really? Well, since freedom’s currently using it I’ll put it as my cover image…

@whalekeeper

Maybe before the dance, we shop for outfits? There are so many shops nearby! The whole school could cancel classes today for it!

And some of the boys have yet to ask the girls! 😈

YES! But yeah, we should for sure wait for Godly, she was so excited.

I can’t remember who was going to ask Riya… I think @freedomwriter76 ‘s Bucky. But…[Read more]

@esther-c

Aww, thanks girl! I guess I haven’t really shared much writing on here lately. But I’ve started on the first draft of the second book, so I’ve been getting a lot more actual writing done. (Instead of just editing… editing… editing… 😂)

Of course! OH YAY!! So has editing book one been the main thing? How has it gone?

@smiley

I’m loving it!!

@grcr

Let me know what you decide to write yours on!

@grcr

Thank you!

@rae

I’m not sure what you found wrong with this scene. I think it’s well written! It feels like I’m reading a published book!

@grcr

Ummm idk lol

I would look up writing prompts? I know KP has an article with writing prompts.

@rae

Yeah, don’t worry if you don’t get to all of them! I know it can be a lot, lol.

@rae

Thanks! That’s so sweet <3

And I’ll go back to EDITING on the first part like you said. You have great feedback! Wanna read the whole thing, XD I’ll post the link! https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ (if you don’t want to that’s totally fine!) Unfortunately, I don’t have any more chapters following this one, but if you want to critique the…[Read more]

@acancello

Aww, thanks girl!

@savannah_grace2009

Shes worried about Hugo!💗 😍 🥹 This was such a good scene you wrote!!

@savannah_grace2009

I like that a lot better! It’s really up to you, though. Rae had some good feedback!

@trailblazer @hybridlore

Is this better?

“Last night, I had a dream…” Lilitu began. They stopped walking in a clearing. “I saw this girl…” he shook his head. “She was crying. She looked so sad, and hopeless…And it was so vivid. I could feel her pain, her suffering, and there was nothing I could do.” His voice was strained. Is he crying? Sef wonde…

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@thearcaneaxiom

BWAHAHA we know your name, now we can hack you! hehe