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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Cool! Idk who the thunderbolts are lol
Wow, you do have a lot of fanfics at this point… I look forwards to seeing where it all goes!
Also your pfp makes me do a internal lol everytime I see it it just brings me so much joy XD
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Also, I use Canva! It’s really great for moodboards!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Lol. I like the descriptions you posted of nature!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Killing Characters in the forum Plotting 2 years, 10 months ago
Just wondering, cause I can’t think of any other way to do it XD
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hybridlore replied to the topic Killing Characters in the forum Plotting 2 years, 10 months ago
What’s wrong with the characters dying because they just ran into the monsters?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Flaz is great 😂
“What? F—Flaz?” Lane looked at him, “W-Where did you come from?”
“The land of endless clothes and uncountable tangles.” Flaz crossed his arms, “I have come from where the moths live happily and mice can chew through every garment that now lays on the floor.”
“You mean the basement?” Lane sighed, “How did we not see y…
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
(Ok so I didn’t get notified for this until just today. 🤦🏻♀️😂)
Awwww, the boissss!! 😭❤️
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Wow. That was beautiful. XD
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Allison replied to the topic Blogs! in the forum Non-Fiction 2 years, 10 months ago
@janellebelovedpig @Savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore @euoida-vision @smiley @anyone!
Few new posts on my blog, nothing to exciting, but there is some 😂
acancello.blogspot.com
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Allison replied to the topic Blogs! in the forum Non-Fiction 2 years, 10 months ago
Lets see…. I love your posts about traveling, creative writings and your photography, although they all are good. 🙂
If you want to check out my blog here it is! Theres not to much on it, just a few recipes and crafts. I’m planning on making it better though 😀
acancello.blogspot.com
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Zahlin is somewhere around 6’6”
Goodness, he’s tall!
Btw what’s this place like?
Do you mean the house itself or Lillen? If you mean the house, it’s basically a mansion with various unexplored rooms if you mean Lillen, the world that the house magically teleported to, I’m not sure. Its @rae ‘s world, so you’d have to ask h…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 10 months ago
Oh and the paragraph about heaven and hell didn’t seem too preachy. I mean, I think it’s fine to have it in there since it was really short. Great job on the description of that, too! I think it works well.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 10 months ago
I thought it ended really well, I liked the mentor-y moment with Master Paul! I didn’t really understand what Cubespace was entirely, so the whole incident confused me a little.
I think Master Paul asked Nahim to fly the ship, but Nahim said no, so the Master left him there on the controls? And then Nahim stabilized it and went to yell at…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
Okay!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
So I guess that chapter by itself doesn’t seem necessary, but the Pythonos is going to kidnap her and Jyron and use them as hostages so that their father will provide military forces and supplies to start a war against the Paynes.
Does that make sense?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
I did mention a possible explanation for why the prisoners might call it that, although I’m not sure it would account for why the Pythonos do.
There are other “units”, this is just the main one and the most important one.
Okay though, that would be hilarious if that actually happened, if Marcurious asked Jraldath why it’s called the UN…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
I know it’s a little rough, but it’s my first draft so definitely far from perfect, lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
Here’s a little snippet from the next chapter from Liv’s POV:
Chapter 17
“I’ll race you to the brook,” Jyran smiled crookedly over his shoulder, barely giving Livia a chance to agree before giving his mount Irwin a gentle squeeze with his calves and galloping away in a cloud of dirt.
Liv tucked a strand of her azure hair behind her ear,…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
Okay, I’ll work on the idea about the horses.
EXU…I kind of like that. We’ll see though. Imagine if I did do EU…and someone from Europe read that, they’d be like “Europe’s not like that at all!” jk.
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