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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Hey guys! I slept in XD
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Esther replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
Ooooh, I’m going to have to read all these charrie backstories you posted and post some of my own later. Looks fun. 😏 And I have a character who has some dark backstory, just have fleshed out all the details yet.
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@jonas @rae @highscribeofatherium @acancello @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer
Ok, so I think I’ve caught up with everything now. XD
(I’m most active during the afternoons, so I think I miss it when y’all are most active. (: )
Oh boy, Hedieh’s at the forge. 🫢 That could be dangerous.
And for swords/weapons and such, in Amir’s actually story, he…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@rae I have to go…. goodnight!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I really have no idea. XD
I think they’re equally matched, so instead of choosing option A or B, I’ll choose option C: someone comes to break up the fight, lol.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Yeah, unfortunately she only knows because of a traumatic and abusive past. As a child she was kidnapped by Pythonos who both experimented on her and forced her to work in their work camps.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ottoline
She sighed in relief as Ellis sent the Lillenings away in favor of training in a smaller group first.
Her hands itched with a desire to use her bow. Shoving her quiet nature aside, she wondered aloud, “Do they have any targets to practice with?” Then she saw the targets lined up along the side of the wall, and her cheeks flushed.…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
He thinks Fracture is insane and thinks himself to be a real person who exists. Like that condition where people think they are Napoleon or someone like that.
Ohh that’s funny, lol.
He might be on to something…Fracture
“Didn’t you get that I was insulting you?” the girl said.
“I don’t understand!” Fracture…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I’m back!
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MineralizedWritings posted an update 2 years, 10 months ago
Current wip word count is just over 20k! I’m a lot more organized this time, and I’m confident it won’t just turn into another do over 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@everyone
I have to go now…I’ll continue the conversation between Fracture and Krenna maybe tonight. This RP is very entertaining lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Fracture
He glowered at the girl in front of him.
“Impudent child! Well, I’ve-” he attempted to come up with a reasonable comeback. “Well, rocks are very intimidating when they’re hurled at your face!”
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Bye!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
It seems Glace is carrying on two conversations simultaneously. I don’t know how that’s possible, but whatever, lol.
Perhaps Fractures insanity will help the matter, lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Yeah, me too XD
Fracture
He tried to contain his growing rage, but failed miserably. Don’t these people have any manners?
He tried again.
“I AM THE GREAT COMPOUND FRACTURE! YOU WILL FEAR ME. FEAR AND TREMBLE! BE AFRAID! BE VERY AFRAID!”
The people fell silent, and one began to laugh.
“HOW DARE YOU LAUGH AT ME!!”…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Fracture
“You want to know what I can do?” Fracture but into the conversation, “I can give my mortal enemies compound fractures, hence my name. And I can do this…” He began to burst into his maniacal laughter again.
He stuck out his lower lip and pouted when no one acknowledged his superior talents.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Fracture
How rude, he thought. Why was everyone ignoring him? Obviously they were all too scared of him to venture near him. He smiled to himself. How he loved being scary.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Is Fracture the only one who doesn’t have anyone who generally hates him?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Fracture
“I would start, but I genuinely doubt that either of you would share your name in return.” Fracture raised his hand and eagerly jumped up and down.
“Oh, I will! I will! But my name is so scary you probably couldn’t even hear it without trembling in fear-”
“I already know your name, you dummy.”
“How…DARE YOU!” he gasped for breath.…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Blogs! in the forum Non-Fiction 2 years, 10 months ago
@janellebelovedpig @hybridlore @acancello
Thank you all so much!! I’ll definitely keep it all in mind. (:
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Oh, good for you!!!!!! I had 23K on mine…but then I decided to rework the plot and change some things…sooo…now I only have 16K 🙁 but just give me a week and I should have it back to 20K, lol
Thanks!
Nice! Yeah… I get it. My first draft was like 48k I think but it just wasn’t going anywhere and I didn’t plan well so I ended up scraping the whole thing 🙁
I know the feeling, I’ve done that so many times! And then one of my friends read my first draft and said it was like a published novel…and I was like….um….no….
XD sometimes a short body of work could seem published… while the bigger picture is a total mess 😳
@freedomwriter76
Thank you!! 😁😁