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@rae

I second @ellette-giselle, but I would probably make the larger portion of it Mandin’s, and then a shorter scene/s from Nahim’s point of view. Being inside the mind of a character who’s depressed and delirious can be disorienting (wow, alliteration there lol.) Except if the rest of the book is from Nahim’s POV–then, it might be better just…[Read more]

 

Hi Min!

Yes, Thankfully I have found it the same here! For me I used to not really speak what I thought when asked. I would just shrug or brush it aside, but I started feeling guilty about it. I came to the place where I knew I needed top say what I really believed. So I did. And the first time I did I was nearly blown to pieces with the…

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@ellette-giselle

I hope you don’t mind me reading your conversation above lol

Man it sounds like you’ve had kind of a rough time in the past with sharing opinions ect. People on Kp are pretty good with not being ‘reactive’ if you know what I mean. Like when you’re talking abt politics and the other person starts raising their voice, cutting you…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 Thank youuuuuuu. and yes, Riker deals with a lot of trouble😅😅

@ellette-giselle You can add any comments if desired!

@grcr Thx, girl 💖

@whalekeeper It’s….complicated😅 Reading Freedom’s Fire helps explain it, but basically….

Leon/Aadelheide were taken from the Ghetto, put in a truck, and were delivered to the camp (though Leon/Aadelheide didn’t know about the camp yet) but the driver of the truck…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Praying! 🙏🏻

@savannah_grace2009

I can’t remember if I told you before, but I’m praying for the request you post a little while back. 💕💕

@freed_and_redeemed

I LOVE THAT SO MUCH

poor Riker <333

@keilah-h Haha, thank you. Fanfics are so fun😂

and yeahhh, it’s def not the best thing😅💀

@rae Ty!!! 💖

@smiley Thanks 😁 and ikr? Tony just being Tony I guess XD

and oooh, that sounds like fun!

@savannah_grace2009 @rae @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @grcr @whalekeeper @loopylin @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-idk-lol

I realized I hadn’t shared these scenes I wanted to share😂 This is an earlier chapter in Broken Shackles, one of the first 10 chapters…and I just wanted to share it since I just edited…[Read more]

@theshadow

If they’re genuine enemies…I’d say just make them constantly arguing or trying to show each other up, and constantly trying to do something better than the other.

Also Pinterest can help a lot with this and give you some ideas!

@theshadow

Anything specific details you want help with?

@lightoverdarkness6

Aww girl I am so sorry, I can’t even imagine how hard that must be!!! You’re so strong for going through that and I promise, everything will turn out the way it’s meant to!! Our Heavenly Father has a wonderful plan of happiness for us, and the trials and challenges we face now will seem like nothing when we return to Him and h…

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@savannah_grace2009

Ofc 💗💗

Yess for real! I always am like “well this sucks but it’s worth it” because I always grow SO MUCH CLOSER to God at camp!!

YESS!!! Samee here.

You’re so generous XD XD thanks girl hahaha

XDXD you’re so welcome girl

Thank you sooo much girl you have no idea how much that means to me!!!! Love you too Light!!!! <333…

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@grcr

Awww I’ve missed you too girl!! <33 How’s your art going? 😁

I’ve been ok. Alive and, well, just living lol. Slowly progressing on everything. My sister and I may be auditioning for our first play next week though! We’re really excited for that, even though we’re just hoping to be in the ensemble… nothing too major lol. also, my brain d…

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@theshadow

Thank you! : )

@ellette-giselle

Aw I’m sorry! I am the same way so you’re not alone!!!!!!!!!

BUT YOUR SHORT STORY ON YOUR MAGAZINE WAS SO GOOD I GOT CHILLS!!!!

I’ll ask one of my guy friends tonight for ya! XD XD

I get that it would be awkward so I got you girl

@ellette-giselle

Aw I’m sorry :/

I get that! Just let us know if you’re ever sick of critiques and just want to hear the positive stuff to get encouraged!

I’d say…just interview some of your guy friends and ask them to give you a cheat sheet XD XD but I think Whaley’s right, they really do just vibe lol