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Active 4 years, 3 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@seekjustice @skredder I’m leaving for about fifteen minutes. Hopefully you’ll be here when I get back! 😉 Goodbye for now.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Within reason of course! *looks nervous*
@skredder Hello!
Would you two like to participate in a word war, since I arrived too late for the last one?
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine @seekjustice @skredder @kaya-young Anyone wanna write with me?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@skredder I love it!!! Â Nice job!
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Clouded Fury Alpha links in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@skredder ooh, now you’re getting me excited! 😀
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MNValentine replied to the topic Is this boring???? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@skredder Thanks so much for your feedback and encouragement!!! Do you feel it would be better if it was shorter and had a little more conflict and/or humor?
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Clouded Fury Alpha links in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@skredder Okay, will do! 🙂
My answers to your questions:
1) I really enjoy the family, so I would keep reading.
2) I think the first line was good because it establishes very soon the close relationship of the family and the lifestyle.
3) So far, I think the characters are consistent 🙂
4) Yup! 😀
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Clouded Fury Alpha links in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
Sorry 😀 I’ve read the first part but I’ve had a crazy weekend and haven’t had time to comment yet, which hopefully I’ll be able to do today 😀
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine @jenwriter17 @catwing @skredder Anyone around? I’m writing!
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Clouded Fury Alpha links in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@skredder I read it! I still love this family 🙂 …..
There were only a few little things I commented on. I saw you said that it was supposed to be in Casse’s POV, which I didn’t know; I thought you were doing omniscient POV. I would suggest more following Casse’s action and her thoughts to make it her POV.
I’m looking forward to the next part! 😀
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Clouded Fury Alpha links in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@skredder I’m ready for it any time you’re ready to give it 😉
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MNValentine started the topic Is this boring???? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
Okay, I may need some help with google docs… I don’t use it much but that seems to be the preferred method here 😀
I am planning on publishing my first novel in June and it’s out for final editing. One of my most trusted readers said that the first chapter is extremely boring, but for once her opinion and mine are clashing, so it would be great…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
YAYY!!!
Drat it! Google docs and I aren’t talking today. Okay everyone, here is the link
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kdetvZPqqTzfuapzrNpwnHcoPkUuFVLkPaVl_BM6K-w/edit?usp=sharing
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
And here is the day we’ve waited for and now is the best of times!!!
Whoops! Ahem, I didn’t mean to start quoting A Tale of Two Cities…or did I?
Either way, the day ew have all been waiting for has arrive and I present…*drumroll*
When Infinity is Empty Prologue–Chapter 2.
Hopefully that excites you. Also, it’s completely unedited and I…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Readers' Corner in the forum Book Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@skredder Ugh…
It was pretty good! Today, incredibly enough, was the first time in my entire life I have ever dyed eggs.
Except with the holiday, I’m NOT ready for Monday… 😛
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Joy replied to the topic Readers' Corner in the forum Book Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@skredder I disappeared. But I suppose I can reappear again before disappearing for two months…
How was your Easter?
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
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Joy replied to the topic KP Literature Character Search Corner in the forum Characters 6 years, 7 months ago
I just made a serious mistake: Not everyone wants to, or is able to, submit their entries on the doc! So I will allow you to submit it here. In fact, I think it’s best if you submit it here.
Submit this information:
Name:
Species: (Can be human. Or anything else…)
Appearance:
Personality:
Other notes and/or facts:And if you are already on…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Readers' Corner in the forum Book Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@jenwriter17 @skredder @rochellaine
I’m reading some Tale of Two Cities if anyone want to join.
(To those of you who are viewing this from your email, this is Readers’ Corner not Writers’ Corner. 😉 )
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