SeekJustice

@seekjustice I’m starting chapter 20 now, and in the opening of that Justice is telling Chessy she is supposed to be at home, as usual. 😛  Then Jonas looks at Justice to make him shut up, also as usual. 😛

However, I was wondering, of course Jonas would tell Justice not to be so harsh, but Justice is just trying to protect Chessy, so why is he…[Read more]

@seekjustice I know right? What are our books thinking?
How did I ever decide on that name? XP

@valtmy Indeed it is.
Yes, fun villains could be fun to write sometimes. ;3

@rochellaine

Okay I have to go to bed now. I got a lot done. YAY!
Perhaps I shall see some of you tomorrow. Good night.

@rochellaine

Hey. Just getting lost reading SeekJustice’s blog and reviewing what I wrote last night… Do you think it is weird if every other character is described as handsome, beautiful, attractive etc.? I mean, my story is supposed to have a sugary romance novel surface (underneath the surface is something else entirely) after…[Read more]

@seekjustice I have been doing third person. Yes, I think I understand now.

@rochellaine Thank you. But I’m closer to finishing this one so I’m working on doing that first… 😛

Yeah, that’s me too. I didn’t want to do Firebird currently, it was being annoying. I wasn’t making much progress (except my book trying to start a romance subplot.…[Read more]

@seekjustice I’m here now!  How’s it going?  I think I’m finally going to read the rest of the third part of the second draft of your first book…I love the way that sounds…before I get back to my own book. 😀

@catwing Your WIP sounds interesting, but I’ve been waiting for three years for you to write Firebird… 😛

Just kidding, though.  I…[Read more]

@seekjustice Well, I have a timeline… and at least one more sad character to add…
Do you mean changing between first and third person?

I know, poor Alex. 🙁

@valtmy *laughs* nice blog, huh?
I do have one book that will have only one POV, in first person… But she is my favorite character. XD

@seekjustice @catwing

Sorry. Am getting distracted checking out the blog 😛

I have no discipline when it comes to POVs. I just finished a chapter with a scene from the POV of a minor character who I doubt will ever show up on page again. I am amazed how you managed to consistently stick with a few POVs each book, SeekJustice.

@seekjustice I had six. *nods* I was told I confused the readers so… And I had planned more for the second book, so I’m going to have to figure that out. It’s fun. ;P

aaahhhh… I shall say she is a teenager who feels betrayed, confused, and really really mad. The group she meets doesn’t help at all either. But I don’t want to say too much that m…[Read more]

@seekjustice Yes, I’ve chopped the POVs in half, so ONLY three now. 😀
It IS the first one with Alex. The same Alex as the short story you helped me edit… but earlier, before all that burning everything which is book two. :3

@seekjustice @catwing

Hey I’ll be here for a bit before I go off for bible study.

SeekJustice you have a blog? Can I read it? 😀

@seekjustice It’s kinda that way with me too. I’ve been rewriting this one for I while and I am excited and want to write book two. 😛
I hope this is the last major rewrite I have to do.
It’s Finding Secrets. I told you about that one right?

@seekjustice *swoops in through the window* *lands regally on the table using her wings as a cape* I have arrived to finish my outline and maybe start on actually writing my book. Like rewriting whole chapters. D:
It is a short outline, so I hope to conquer it swiftly. *nods*

@seekjustice  @rochellaine  @valtmy  @jenwriter17  @sarah-anson  @anyone

Oy! I’m writing! Care to join me?

Hey guys, a friend of mine passed away this morning. She was born with medical issues and has been in and out of hospitals her entire life. Praise God she was a believer and so no longer feel pain, but it is still very hard on her family. So please keep her family in your prayers, she was only 12.

@seekjustice, @rochellaine, @jenwriter17, @catwing…[Read more]

@seekjustice @jenwriter17 @alia @gh24682468999

Thanks guys 🙂 All the best for you too!

@seekjustice @rochellaine

Bye! I’m also leaving.

@seekjustice @valtmy Haha, I have been thinking about Nes so much I thought he had a longer scene.  I see I was wrong. 😛  But thanks for the input.  In answer,

No, she’s not going on a long journey, she’ll be coming home pretty soon, so living in the same town with Nes, (at least during the beginning of the book,) she’ll probably see him ag…[Read more]

@rochellaine

I had to return to the doc to see who Nes is (me and my forgetfulness).

I suppose it’s really up to you to decide since I don’t know what you have planned for your plot. The whole proverbs thing is a potentially interesting quirk that can be a good source of wit and levity (not that your story is a comedy).

I’m fine if he’s just a…[Read more]

@seekjustice

If you’re the motherly type that wants to make sure no one gets hurt. why are you hurting your characters? 😛

@rochellaine

Great! I would love to continue reading your story then 🙂

Hmm… giving your MC two names might be interesting and justified if she is navigating two different cultures.

As for my own MC… no English names…[Read more]

@seekjustice Contemporary is very fun!  You should definitely try it sometime.  Mh, that would be cool.  I’m not much into ancient history, which I find quite depressing as a general rule, but I got so excited about this story I decided to write it anyway. 😉

Haha, I suppose I’ve become desensitized.  I’ve had a brothers/male cousins for all of…[Read more]