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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic in the forum Sarah B. 10 years, 9 months ago
I checked out your blog, and I REALLY liked your latest post (http://contentedseamstress.blogspot.com/2014/01/our-generation-and-church_15.html) and definitely agreed with you. Have you seen the film “Divided”? It talks more about why youth are leaving the church. Here is a link. It’s less than hour long, and pretty…[Read more]
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Kristian Snow replied to the topic in the forum Sarah B. 10 years, 9 months ago
Essays ARE fun! I’ll have to read some of your blog, thanks for the link! ^_^
Have any other hobbies?
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Kristian Snow replied to the topic in the forum Sarah B. 10 years, 9 months ago
Ohhh, nice! I’ve enjoyed all of those! Have you read The Giver?
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic in the forum Sarah B. 10 years, 9 months ago
Awesome! I read and give you feedback when I get the chance!
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic in the forum Sarah B. 10 years, 9 months ago
Hi Hannah! Glad you’re committing to writing and joining the forum! You definitely should post some of your writing in the critiques board!
I’m also curious to know what Kris asked. What do you like to write?
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Reagan Ramm started the topic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 9 months ago
Warning: This excerpt is a tad-bit morbid. Nothing graphic though, at least in my opinion.
Here is part of a chapter of a Dystopian novel I’m working on called “Eventide.” I have a few questions I’d like to get feedback on. I’m still developing the world so some contextual references may change. It’s basically about a society ruled by a…[Read more]
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Kristian Snow replied to the topic in the forum Sarah B. 10 years, 9 months ago
Ha! Most likely >_> Hopefully better than Honey Boo Boo…Maybe she could make a guest appearance, to bring in more viewers.
Cool potatoes? Those don’t taste as good.
But, yeah, that’s the rarest type, especially with you being a guy. But you probably already knew that. XD
True.. I think I’ve heard that saying! I like to write my first…[Read more]
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Kristian Snow replied to the topic in the forum Sarah B. 10 years, 9 months ago
Oh, goodness alive, I feel your pain 😛 I hate writing intros about myself, too!
It’s awesome to meet you, Hannah!
What have you “dabbled” with the most? 🙂 Have a favorite type of writing (poems, novels, short stories, nonfiction, etc) you like to work on?
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Kristian Snow replied to the topic in the forum Sarah B. 10 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, they’re fun! Have you read many dystopians?
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Kristian Snow replied to the topic in the forum Sarah B. 10 years, 9 months ago
That’s sometimes true XD In this case, I just don’t like being “out” anytime you accidentally bump someone’s head.
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Kristian Snow replied to the topic in the forum Sarah B. 10 years, 9 months ago
Oh! They’re great 🙂 LARPing rules are frustrating, though.
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Kristian Snow replied to the topic in the forum Sarah B. 10 years, 9 months ago
Ohhhh, I like those! B)
I’m doing a lot of brainstorming right now, like you 🙂 Mostly for a dystopian from the POV of two brothers.
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Kristian Snow replied to the topic in the forum Sarah B. 10 years, 9 months ago
Ah, that makes sense. Happens to me, too, when I’m working a lot.
Gotcha 😛 Ever made a LARPing sword?
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Kristian Snow replied to the topic in the forum Sarah B. 10 years, 9 months ago
Yay, mysteries! Those are tough >_>
Awwww…:P What names do you have?
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Kristian Snow replied to the topic in the forum Sarah B. 10 years, 9 months ago
Percy Jackson! YESH! *highfives*
What kinda stuff are ya brainstorming?
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Kristian Snow replied to the topic in the forum Sarah B. 10 years, 9 months ago
Well, killed or badly injured a few, I suppose… it scared the others off, for some reason!
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic in the forum Sarah B. 10 years, 9 months ago
Also, I was pronouncing “NAAFSI” as “NAFF-Sigh” as opposed to “N-A-A-F-S-I” or “NAFF-See”. I personally like the acronym, so if you do decide to keep it, then maybe you could just have a character(s) refer to “NAAFSI” in dialogue as “Naff-Sigh” or “Sigh” or “Naff” or something. Perhaps the lower-case letters or abbreviations would help people get…[Read more]
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic in the forum Sarah B. 10 years, 9 months ago
Wow! I really like this! I like this genre, and the mystery, and the situation (no parents; no friends, being watched and monitored, etc). I also can personally relate to the MC, and she feels real, which is very good.
I was thinking, though, if it might not be better to open the story with the scene where she is talking to her parents. This is…[Read more]
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic in the forum Sarah B. 10 years, 9 months ago
Good to see you on the forum, Blaine!
World-building definitely is one of the most enjoyable parts of writing. I’m in the middle of my most ambitious world-building/plot planning project yet. Since I have so little time for writing, I figured I would just plan out every single little detail before-hand (a little at a time) and then try and write…[Read more]
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic in the forum Sarah B. 10 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, I think I’m probably the only one here who has public schooled as much as homeschooled. 😛
Good to see you on the forum, Sage!
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