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@jonas

So I guess that chapter by itself doesn’t seem necessary, but the Pythonos is going to kidnap her and Jyron and use them as hostages so that their father will provide military forces and supplies to start a war against the Paynes.

Does that make sense?

@jonas

 I did mention a possible explanation for why the prisoners might call it that, although I’m not sure it would account for why the Pythonos do.

There are other “units”, this is just the main one and the most important one.

Okay though, that would be hilarious if that actually happened, if Marcurious asked Jraldath why it’s called the UN…[Read more]

I know it’s a little rough, but it’s my first draft so definitely far from perfect, lol

@jonas

Here’s a little snippet from the next chapter from Liv’s POV:

Chapter 17

“I’ll race you to the brook,” Jyran smiled crookedly over his shoulder, barely giving Livia a chance to agree before giving his mount Irwin a gentle squeeze with his calves and galloping away in a cloud of dirt.

Liv tucked a strand of her azure hair behind her ear,…

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@jonas

Okay, I’ll work on the idea about the horses.

EXU…I kind of like that. We’ll see though. Imagine if I did do EU…and someone from Europe read that, they’d be like “Europe’s not like that at all!” jk.

@jonas

I might just keep it the UNIT, then.

You keep asking, though, why it is the “unit” and how is it the definition of the word. I tend to be lazy and not overthink it. Correct me if I’m wrong but does it really matter why it’s called that? If so, why does it matter? (sorry if I sound like a brat rn, I’m just kind of confused.) It is just a…[Read more]

@jonas

Sorry. Brain fart. I meant EU. (Why did I put P?) But then that reminds me of the abbreviation for Europe. So idk.

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom

So in my WIP, Liv has a horse named Xandro. I was thinking that all the races have horses that are intelligent and match the “color scheme” and have the same powers. For example: Liv in an Aquino, she has blue hair, eyes, skin, clothes, and has the power to manipulate water. Xandro has a blue coat, eyes, hooves, mane and…[Read more]

@esther-c

Yeah, ofc!

@jonas

In that case, maybe the prison could be split into several units and you could call this one the ‘Experimental Unit’

Okay, I like that. Maybe I could call it the EP instead of the UNIT for short? (I know, so creative…not.)

@jonas

I love conviction! And oh my gosh, Flaz would drive Ellis insane, this is going to be hilarious!

@hybridlore

I like it! Thing is my favorite, lol. I don’t think you should change the name even though it’s a little mean, but it’s up to you. I think it fits her and she likes it, so it works.

Thanks! I love Thing, she makes a great dynamic with Tailen, and is fun, funny, and perfect for not so subtle infodumping🤣

The plot is a little confu…

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@jonas

I could join. I’m not sure what characters I would put up though. I’ll skim through the forum and see if it sparks my interest.

@jonas

So is that to say that if it somehow had multiple needles or something it would work? But then the two people would have to walk around holding the sword between them. Or could the evil entity somehow spread to multiple swords that would allow it to control multiple people?

Let’s just said that the physical blade itself is not…[Read more]

@hanako

little huh?

@jonas

lol 😂

@jonas

Alrighty! 😅

@jonas

(you’re welcome!! 😄)

Yeah, I was thinking it might be cool if they had to journey a bit before they got there. The house could tell them how to get there.

Mmm, good idea. *thinks of all the annoying things Flaz might say while on the journey*

My character isn’t at the house though, so everyone else can do whatever they want. Maybe my c…

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@jonas

Alrighty! He sounds pretty cool!! 😄 (And so does Conviction)

So where is the house now? I know it transported them across worlds, but where, geographically, is it? I would assume it is somewhere near a city, since they were transported there to help the queen?

Hmm… near a city would make sense… or even possibly near her castle (or…[Read more]

@rae

It’s a knife, with a blade surrounded by green mist. It can pierce stone, and is a poisoned blade. It chooses one master, and unless the master gives it away, it will never serve another.

While sharp and will pierce the flesh of almost anything, it can never hurt its master, even if the master wills it to.

It’s a mysterious magical bla…

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